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that picture sounded amasing and so abstract!!!!

you should really read dagger stiletto's stories their a lot like yours, and if your making a sequal i wish you the best of hope,good luck!

Wow, I have to say that I love how you paced the story. They were acting age appropriate and didn't simply jump into the smut when they both confessed so for taking your time with it, I thank you. And I don't think this is too sweet at all~ You portrayed the whole 'innocent first love' thing very very well and both Naruto and Sasuke managed to stay in character even through all the lovey dovey stuff that would SO not happen in canon. I'm looking forward to see a sequel to this! And of course, I will also be supporting you if you are going to write original fiction. I'd love to see you shape your own little world =D

Cheers

I enjoyed this. The imagery in their pictures and paintings was very sweet. You described them so well it was easy for me to picture. I am looking forward to reading more of your take on them in a sequel while they are at college. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

Honto kawaii!

Looking forward to the sequel!

Naruto and Sasuke were so confused about how to tell the other what they were feeling that I got confused. I don't know what Sasuke's got planned but I hope it works. Until next chapter...

Ahh! So exciting!! I moved to a new location, had absolutely no internet for like 2 weeks, and when i do get it and have a chance to check up on fic updates, there are three new ones for this story!!! I was so happy =D I just finished reading the last chapter and let me tell you they were amazing! Lol poor Naruto! Going green at the thought of escargot, its actually really really good! My mom ordered some once on a cruise we went on and only let me have two... stingy =/ I am a very, very, very non-active person, but reading about their mountain bike ride (minus Naruto's crash) almost makes me wanna consider giving biking another chance. At least earlier in the morning when its still chilly out. I live in California, in the afternoons, it gets hot =/ Uwahhh~ So much going on in these chapters, I'm kinda all over the place. They made out!! That was awesome! But now they are both dealing with it in completely different ways. I'm concerned about Naruto's reaction... even moreso after what Itachi said... I can only hope things will work out well for them, and neither Itachi or Kakashi will have to kill off a young person xD That would be so not cool! Lol *Glomps* You do make me so very happy. I think I caught a glimpse of you speaking about being too lazy to find a beta in a review response that was above the Review this Story link. If you want one I'd like to volunteer my services *bows like a butler* Now that I've got my internet back *Tears of joy* I can read til my lil heart is content~ Think about it, ne ne? My email address should be visible for ya... Well I'm off to see if i what I thought was another one of your stories was actually updated. Ja ne~

Yay update! I love the way you had them both working through their feelings, they were right to be anxious and uncertain. I'm also glad that Sasuke has the presence of mind to deal with the issues instead of being the kind of man who runs and hides.

I love your story, it's...heartfelt. Sincere.

Please keep up the excellent work!

Hmmmm, I Love This Story and I Love That You Update Often;; Keep Up The Good Work Man <3

This chapter was too short, clipped and kinda cut off. I think for the talk, it should be angsty and inflict pain on Sasuke. I mean, Sasuke knows how he feels, and naruto is confused which would make sense.