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Two young gay hotties, best friends and mutual secret crushes. Whatever are they going to do? ^_^ I can't wait to find out!

Great chapter.

So far so good. Although I think your latest chapters sexual tension was too much in the wrong places. It really should have been laid on thick when they were in the car and Sasuke had the blindfold on. You also could have gone a little deeper into the obvious sexual tension when it came to the dessert time. If you'd added more emphasis to that, I think I would have liked the chapter a lot more.

Hmmm...Sasuke blindfolded.

Yes.

Confessions are cool to write, aren't they?

I love this story. It just leaves me wanting more. I'm usually not a fan of au because it always seems that the personality of the characters get lost, but you stick to the original personality perfectly. cant wait to read more so update!

ooh I LOVE this, the descriptions of the salt beds and the sky and the river, all of it painted a pretty mental picture that I would soo love to see in life, and I totally love the friendship between Sasu and Naru as well as Itachi and Kakashi, and really the brotherly love of the Uchihas is too cute and sweet, I think I love the collaboration between pictures and Naru's artwork that sounds like the perfect combo, all in all, this was an amazing first chapter and I cant wait to read more, ty ty ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

Great beginning. Looking forward to more.

Wow. Sad to say but I have scavenged a whole multitude of fics, SasuNARU, NaruSASU (bwaaah, what can I say it's an obses...er passion LOL)... recently I've resorted to reading whatever there is to encounter...and have not encountered one as vibrant, vivacious, verdant as this in quite a WHILE! Your descriptions actually distracted me from the whole SasuNARU focus LOL (all the more brilliant imo as I abhor descriptions, seriously, SERIOUSLY! :))

You've laid a fertile ground full of possibilities and I really cannot wait for the rest.

Kudos :)