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How did Itachi not spank that kid the last chapter XD!? I was just holding my breath for the 'and then Itachi tossed the brat over his knee and spanked him, and enjoyed it way too much'. He's an insufferable git, but it's cute on Sasuke. Like he acts like he knows, but he's so... young. I see what you meant by acting younger because he's a little emotionally stunted. Like he can't figure things through and doesn't know how to get what he'd like without kicking up a fuss. It's somehow cute. How does that work? And omg, poor Itachi. It's what happens when you have a cute little brother, you wind up unconsciously spoiling them XD. And I like how with Naruto and Itachi's interaction is was like 'that's hot. I'd tap that', and with Sasuke we see more of a 'that's ho-wha...? It's a teen/my baby brother... but it's hot and I'd tapwhaaa? Stop that hormones D:'. It promises for an interesting... relationship development XD.

And oooh, dear. Orochi the pervert and part time pedo. And OMG. Jiriya... and Sasuke. There will either be blood or Jiriya will throw him to the wolves in self defense of his sanity, provided Sasuke continues on his brat streak XD.

Ibiki really pissed me off in Chapter 2. So now the cat's out of the bag about Itachi's "other job". I can't wait to see what Naruto brings to the story. Keep up the amazing work. Until next chapter...

Little Sasuke and Itachi were so cute together in chapter one. I can't wait to find out what Itachi's "other job" is. I have some guesses but I won't reveal them until I find out the answer. On to chapter 2...

Nice beginning! But one thing bugged me: You mentioned Sasuke's age twice and first you said he is 10 and the second time 8 years old. Which is the right one?

But whatever. This story caught my eye. Keep it up! :-)

This seems like a great beginning. Keep it up!