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I love this chapter, but I wish you'd left in the parts you took out. I feel like it would have been better if you left it as it was.

This is such an amazing story, it's upsetting you never finished it. Deidara is such an uke, I can't stand it much longer *goes fangirl insane*

Hey I love the story, Normelly i dont really like Daidara in ff's... but this is REALLY good!!!

Advice: I think you should put the old 'rape-scene' back in, because then the story would make so much more sence! because Daidara is traumatic affected by it and it is a important fact in the story, that dai is so fragile about it..:D

Keep up the good work-I LOVE it :D:D:D:D:D:DD:D:D

Yay!! I read the first chapters when they came out...then my computer crashed. So I spent the last four hours catching up ^.^ I really like how you make Dei so confused, not really sure what he wants/needs. It fits post-trauma stress symptoms well. I fell bad for him, for what he's gone through and what he's dealing with. But I love the way you have Hidan interacting with him. Its adorable the way he rips on Dei!! More HidanDei is always appreciated ;) I can't wait to see the 'missing' fight scene. I don't think that was so out of place. The way you construct your story is your style, and it works for this fic. Can't wait to find out who has shown up and what the future holds for poor Deidara. (Does somebody love him in the end? If no...can I have him? *blushes*) ^.^ Keep up the great witting!
-TiEnya

... I just sat down and read through all of this. Oh man, I hope it isn't abandoned! I think you're pretty good at writing Deidara! He is my favourite, and also I have a pretty big thing for humiliation and comfort, so uh. This hits the spot. *cough*
You are also pretty good at writing the Zombie Brothers, especially Kakuzu ... two close almost-favourites. I dig the PoV-switching between Dei and Kakashi - I think Kakashi's internal thoughts and reactions especially are also quite in-character.

Huh, and Kakashi x Deidara - who'da thought?? This makes me want more of this pairing, it makes my inner fanboi happy <3

Hey, I am in the process of reading your fic - I'm at the end of ch3 now. I wanted to tell you that I absolutely love it - you're doing great job with describing and building all the characters' personalities. You're doing an excellent job with Deidara, who has always seemed to be quite difficult to write, because his type of crazy is quite unusual. I love the way you sway him seamlessly between rage and almost naive petulance!

Sera, work is noming my heeeaaad....

Though this cheers me up. Deidara all affronted is so CUTE, and it's hilarious that he can tell the truth and NOBODY BELIEVES HIM. "Dei-chan, you really are something else. You'd let us believe you betrayed us so we wouldn't think you'd fallen for genjutsu?" Even Kakashi went "wut." XD

Being depressed against the tree, failed!making out with Kakashi, was also pretty cute. I have the suspicion that under different circumstances he'd be annoyed instead of depressed... "I'm not allowed to move, I'm not allowed to touch, I'm not allowed to TALK, WHY THE HECK AM I DOING THIS THEN? MAYBE YOU CAN ENLIGHTEN ME."

^-^ Thanks!

Cool story. I've only read the first chapter, but it's looking good so far. I'll read more later. Keep up the good work.
=)

Nah... I mean, I was hopeful, but I was mostly teasing.

::laughs:: I like the pink pinata style! It all makes sense later, so it works, ne?

More tomorrow from me, I think... I need sleeeeep. They make me work before noon! ;_;

Aww man, you caught me! *tries to struggle against the hug* *is normally a lurker* I've been reading this story since the beginning, and I must say that I eagerly await each and every chapter. This is an amazingly well written story that makes me want to go from giggling to almost crying in some parts, and , to me at least, it isn't the least bit confusing.

*sits back and eagerly awaits the next chapter* :D