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WOOOOOT! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for the update! *glomps* and I must say, that omake at the end.... WAS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS THINKING!! rofl! Hum... and I do think tha Drama suits you better (not that the fight scenes wern't awesome too) and I CAN'T WAIT FOR IBIKI!!! heehee! He's one of my fav.'s! and I think, with is understanding of psychology, that his opinion of Dei-kun will be very interesting! Can't wait!

No, thank you for making something lovely to share! I'm glad my review made you happy. (And yeah, I was okay. I wore my slippers to work instead of shoes, and flopped backwards in my chair, for lo, the back is squishy and adjusts, and there was coffee, and it was good. ^^)

And this... reading eight chapters at once has spoiled me! I got used to easily-resolved cliffhangers. XD

the scene with Sakura... I liked that. It would've been interesting to see how it played out if Deidara had been able to execute his plan... to just turn it off and never tell her, just because he didn't want to see her look at him like he was a good person. Now that thread of the narrative is a little trainwreck festival, complete with pink pinata. X3

Kakuzu charms me. I don't know why- he's cranky and fussy and is all about his paperwork, is not at all nice or obliging... heh, maybe that's why I like him. Straightforward, efficient, and a good foil for insanity. X3

An update today was a nice gift after my first day answering angry customer service calls... Maybe you'll have another present for me Monday? (a woman can hope.) :3???

Thanks!

ahh busy life crap...it does get in one's way:)

oh pretty, messed up Deidara...just have him going in circles emotionally.

these were all good exchanges to advance the story, me likee!
and as much as I think Sakura is a bitch to Naruto, I still like her(just not with Naruto). So the dynamics between them were great.
oddly made me happy he was chewing on clay 0.o

I love the fact that you gave Akatsuki that kind of prison morality/honor amongst bad guys that don't go in for rape and/or child molesting (those people never last long in C block!)

thanks for the fun:D


ps -

(Totally blaming any evilness on a fictitious evil persona lol)
sure honey...sure. (pats you on head in a placating manner)

I'm enjoying this so much more than I thought I would... I clicked on a whim and wound up reading all eight parts in one go, even though I had to get up for work this morning... and two or three hours of sleep later, I don't regret it (yet, we'll see how I feel at 4:30.... ^^;;;). I giggled, I cried- you do a very good job with psychological realism and this story is a guilty pleasure, like eating candy by yourself so you don't have to share. I LOVE Deidara's "WHAT." interjected throughout the narrative- it's hilarious, portrays his personality perfectly, and excellently conveys that sense of -stop- people get when they're affronted.

Please continue, and thanks so much for sharing!

thoughoughly enjoyed what i have read so far (and chapter 3 is tame compaired to what i am currently writting) i am enjoying this, its a couple i have never seen and i like the idea of kakashi being with someone besides iruka or sasuke

"about 300 extra words in which the men took turns with Deidara - and this was a problem how?"
hahahaha.

I finally got to read both of the last two chapters, YAY!

really so nice how you have the characters blend. lovely, lovely writing.
and just keep up with the out-takes because they make me roll. XD

chapter 7...wow.
I love, Love, LOVE that you made Kakashi scared and bear witness to Deidara's turmoil.
I haven't read anything quite like this.
I had a feeling when you gave your explanations about your milder version of chapter 3
that we would get flashbacks and yay we did!!! and you made him cry.

"It's ok, I think it's just Hidan trying to braid weeds into your hair."
-that was beautiful.

why do I like reading this...because shut up!
now go work, educate yourself, and write woman, write!

Q-chan wants more! sorry about the lack of constructive comment. I'm no good at that kinda thing, but still wanted to show my appreciation!

I LOVE YOU DEI-KUN!!!

your welcome for the review:)
Deidara in girls clothes is a must by the way and no one is eviler than youuuuu!

the story wouldn't move without action and politics! your story is quite original,
thanks for that.

I am loving this story. I hadn't really thought about Kakashi and Deidara together, but I like it! Hidan is such a jerk, but you make him so funny. Can't wait to see where you go with this. :)

Deidara needs more spot light. *Pleased to have found this flick*
It is wonderfully written and Deidara character is a lovely blend of
upset wounded teenager and old dark I've seen everything in the world agelessness.