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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Me again, I tend to review flicks I really like by chapter.
I love the omake sections. They are amusing, Deidara has enough
teenager pride and balls to say he's from the Akasuki if dressed like a girl.
Poor guy can't get a break can he.
I love the omake sections. They are amusing, Deidara has enough
teenager pride and balls to say he's from the Akasuki if dressed like a girl.
Poor guy can't get a break can he.
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter, you managed to put such emotion in the sceen
to really paint a picture with out getting to any nasty details.
Deidara is a scared trying to be tough kid.
Poor Lee. *Ruffles his hair* Even people you think you can trust
that should be above such things because of job-cops, judges- etc
can be terrible people.
to really paint a picture with out getting to any nasty details.
Deidara is a scared trying to be tough kid.
Poor Lee. *Ruffles his hair* Even people you think you can trust
that should be above such things because of job-cops, judges- etc
can be terrible people.
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi...Deidara is one pairing I have never thought of.
I been liking Itachi Deidara after finding two very good flic
with that pairing. Good fanfiction is hard to find.
It's sooo cute! Poor confused Dei, blow up a city! Whee.
Get all confusal and kiss and get rejected and he's all...Whaaaa? *Whineee* I'll kill youuu.
I been liking Itachi Deidara after finding two very good flic
with that pairing. Good fanfiction is hard to find.
It's sooo cute! Poor confused Dei, blow up a city! Whee.
Get all confusal and kiss and get rejected and he's all...Whaaaa? *Whineee* I'll kill youuu.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well I have wanted to read this for a while and so glad I did!
I read the chapters over the last two days so I will try to get my thoughts in here coherently;)
thanks for this funny, angry, and what I think is pretty true to character
account of Deidara
beautifully descriptive, I love how you manage Deidara's speech, wonderful!
funny my thought was that Neji found him interesting too, in the beginning, but your right the chemistry you
wove between Dei and Kakashi is just lush.
and thank you so much for the "out-takes"
"YOU!" screamed Kankuro. Deidara's heart stopped...was he recognized?"You...... do you...." Kankuro was blushing, "...wanna...go out with me?" - too much fun!!!
as for chapter 3, have you ever thought of adding a "director's cut" along with the revised chapter 3? to give people choices reading about how dark a plot bunny ran through your twisted thoughts? kind of curious about that "totally worse ...so much worse" version O.o
now you went ahead and made him human and vulnerable and he has FEELINGS! I'm sooo glad. you've taken a rather despicable boy and now we all want to heal him (well through Kakashi we do;D) I really look forward to the development of this story and wonderful writing.
thank you:)
"Hmm." Kakashi approximated, "I'd say exactly as many days as the author finds necessary." "Necessary for what, un?" Kakashi just smiled. ".......o_0" bwwaaaaaa hahahahahha !!! (wipes tear from eye -I really do love 'out-takes'.
I read the chapters over the last two days so I will try to get my thoughts in here coherently;)
thanks for this funny, angry, and what I think is pretty true to character
account of Deidara
beautifully descriptive, I love how you manage Deidara's speech, wonderful!
funny my thought was that Neji found him interesting too, in the beginning, but your right the chemistry you
wove between Dei and Kakashi is just lush.
and thank you so much for the "out-takes"
"YOU!" screamed Kankuro. Deidara's heart stopped...was he recognized?"You...... do you...." Kankuro was blushing, "...wanna...go out with me?" - too much fun!!!
as for chapter 3, have you ever thought of adding a "director's cut" along with the revised chapter 3? to give people choices reading about how dark a plot bunny ran through your twisted thoughts? kind of curious about that "totally worse ...so much worse" version O.o
now you went ahead and made him human and vulnerable and he has FEELINGS! I'm sooo glad. you've taken a rather despicable boy and now we all want to heal him (well through Kakashi we do;D) I really look forward to the development of this story and wonderful writing.
thank you:)
"Hmm." Kakashi approximated, "I'd say exactly as many days as the author finds necessary." "Necessary for what, un?" Kakashi just smiled. ".......o_0" bwwaaaaaa hahahahahha !!! (wipes tear from eye -I really do love 'out-takes'.
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This great. I love Deidara in this. Thx! :)
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... I think you did well, very well indeed. Good story, too. :)
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is actually one of the first stories with Deidara that I'm reading (always liked him, but he just didn't appeal in fictions to me before), and I'm slowly but surely getting hooked.
I can't help but smile every other line at Deidara's thoughts, which seemingly won't stop flowing despite the severity of the situation he's in... well, at least until the middle of the last chapter, that is. By the way, I very much liked how much you did and didn't show of what was happening in the dungeon. And no, Deidara didn't seem too much ooc to me. I'm pretty much in accordance with Kakashi's assesment of the situation/Deidara's mental state, the latter being young still and possibly harbouring an inferiority complex.
Speaking of the copy nin: It was the fascinating idea - and hope - of more and in-depth interaction between Kakashi and Deidara that kept me reading in the beginning, and lo and behold! you seem to be catering to my taste. :) Out of nowhere, Kakashi/Deidara has suddenly become a possible pairing for my reading habits (... only there aren't really any such stories, what a shame), although I kind of dislike talking of "pairings". It's just that I think the two personalities could make for some very interesting interaction of more than just one sort... But who am I kidding? Of course, Kakashi comforting a hurt Deidara is a very appealing picture in my mind, as is picturing the two more intimately... Yep, here's the stupid fangirl side of me making an appearance, which would also like to thank you for the "new" pairing, by the way. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I can't help but smile every other line at Deidara's thoughts, which seemingly won't stop flowing despite the severity of the situation he's in... well, at least until the middle of the last chapter, that is. By the way, I very much liked how much you did and didn't show of what was happening in the dungeon. And no, Deidara didn't seem too much ooc to me. I'm pretty much in accordance with Kakashi's assesment of the situation/Deidara's mental state, the latter being young still and possibly harbouring an inferiority complex.
Speaking of the copy nin: It was the fascinating idea - and hope - of more and in-depth interaction between Kakashi and Deidara that kept me reading in the beginning, and lo and behold! you seem to be catering to my taste. :) Out of nowhere, Kakashi/Deidara has suddenly become a possible pairing for my reading habits (... only there aren't really any such stories, what a shame), although I kind of dislike talking of "pairings". It's just that I think the two personalities could make for some very interesting interaction of more than just one sort... But who am I kidding? Of course, Kakashi comforting a hurt Deidara is a very appealing picture in my mind, as is picturing the two more intimately... Yep, here's the stupid fangirl side of me making an appearance, which would also like to thank you for the "new" pairing, by the way. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay so that chapter made me tear up. I felt SOOOOOO bad for him! And I wouldn't call Deidara out of character at all, he's going through the emotions that ANYONE would be going through had the same thing happened to them, it's character development. I offically LOVE this story. Any story that can make me laugh, cry, and feel all angsty has my vote. *holds out Hello Panda* you've earned it!
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww I feel kinda bad for Deidara, I know I shouldn't but I do. He'd be much better off in Konoha. And that thing at the end had me laughing like a mad woman! Freakin' hilarious! Can't wait to read more... this story is awesomeness.
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this so far and can't wait to see where it goes!