rate_review Reviews

you missed a t when talking about the reader's nose from being thrown to the ground near the begining. I loved number 7 and i love that you put in your number references for your readers! I'm special give me a cookie! ;)

Fucking WIN. You have no idea how happy it makes me to know that I'm not the only person left on the planet that write from 2nd person POV. Also, being a bad enough dude to bang Kakuzu? You get brownie points for that.

Keep up the fuckwin work, dahling.

Hey there! I stumbled across your story upon searching for some good OC fic, and I'm glad I did. I enjoyed Kakuzu's characterization in this, especially the way you ended it on such a note; I found it oddly satisfying, mainly because it pandered to my partially-masochistic preference for bittersweet turnouts. The SI herself reflected a little too much of Hidan's character for my taste, a distinction somewhat reinforced by the homages to a certain yaoi Doujinshi scattered throughout the chapter, but the story itself was still very good, and of a much better quality than that of a lot of the fics posted here.

I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work! :]

Great stories (I also read honey and vinegar), though I liked this one more. I hope to read more soon, hopefully with Kisame?

Gah....I love it. You don't really see this sort of pairing at all (Kakuzu with any woman, much less me--squee) and definitely not this good. The lemon was great. Something fresh. I love this. Thanks so much for writing it! <3

~L.E. Death