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I read this entire story in 2 days because I just couldn't stop reading it. I cried and laughed and just omg I can't even explain everything this story caused me. Thank you so much for writing it! I've always loved your stories and this is my all time favorite. Thank you thank you thank you!!!

Oh my god this chapter made me cry. Like actual tears cry. I love your work so much. You just draw me in really deeply and just damn! I love this!

again, I can't help but just cry. This is so amazing and sad and just brilliant.

This was an amazing story and I'm sorry I didn't read it sooner. You must have worked hard for this one and I'm all the more grateful

To sum this up with one word. WOW!!!! One of the best I have read by far!

Even though I'm not a naruto fan, I enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks and keep it coming.

Hi! I read this story at ff dot net if I'm not mistaken and I thoroughly enjoyed it. You have a anon review that appears to read your story just to criticize each of your chapter, if not, gave of sarcastic comment. Yes, I have to agree with his/her points, some of it I guess, especially regarding contradictions of Itachi's decisions as king as well as the blood this anon reviewer is pointing out. But hey, we're all novice writers here. We're not Stephen King or any of those professional writers which has loads of editor that edited their work for months or a year, and then even with those editing, their are still people out there who criticizes their work, So for someone to criticized novice writers like us, per parts and per bits is kinda funny, but then again it improves the author/writer as well. But the sarcastic remark is... well, rude.

Your whole plot is good, entertaining at some point. It's angsty and I could feel Sasuke's frustration and continuous heartbreak everytime Naruto leaves him. Who would have not gone crazy if you see the person you love the most keeps on dying on you, right? Atleast now though, the two of them will be happy eternally. :)

( but he could say without a shadow of a doubt that his and Sasuke’s fate was intertwined in ways superseding everything he thought he knew of love. Love paled when he thought of what he felt. Perhaps it was a similar feeling to what had driven Sasuke mad.)

-wow- deep stuff- beautiful.

- i wish all this 'other' stuff was a separate story. if itachi is the most powerful of his kind and the king- why does he put up with the council and danzou- why not just kill him- why not have his followers kill the council if they are a threat to sasuke, etc....yeah shoulda been a separate story

and naruto lived and died 10 horrible life times_ so he could become a 'balance' warrior_ and if he didn't want to be one you were going to destroy his soul- that's just bull shit. yeah it's your story- but you enjoy too much pain and agony- and really- destroy his fucking soul- you are a bitch aren't you.....i suppose it helps keep your stories interesting and complicated and loved by many apparently.

and eewww- having itachi drink from sasuke's soul mate- that's just all kinds of betrayal and makes him a creepy pedophile

you have sasuke awake and mad with starvation- itachi warning naruto that sasuke is starving and needs to eat blood- so why didn't itachi bring him blood???? cause it's more dramatic to have them all standing around suffering and talking about it and too easy to bring in a few gallons of blood....so the drama. i'm not anti-drama and i enjoy some angst- but when you completely ignore the most simple and easiest and most obvious way to deal with this problem- in order to have them standing around and suffering about the problem instead- it becomes almost a parody of what was intended

(“Whoa. I’m a member of an endangered species,” gaped Naruto.)


(“If things were different,” murmured Pein.
“Make them different. We deal in threads of fate, right? Well, you know there is always more than one fate... Fate is what you make of it.”... “You should change your fate.)

-you do great dialogs and turns of phrases