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That was totally fantastic!!!! So sad there are only 3 chappies left!!!! I really love this story!!!! This was really good!!!! I loved how Sasuke tracked Naruto and Itachi tracked Sasuke!!!! I hope problems between Itachi and Pain will clear up!!!! Thanks a lot for the update!!!! See you again soon!!!!

Wow.

I discovered you on yaoi gallery and i wanted to read this story in my ipod befor going to bed, so i had to move to AFF.

I never got to bed.

This story... It is awesome. I haven't the words to tell you how much i love it (that, and i'm french, so my english vocabulary is less than extended). I love it so much, i crave for the next chapter...

Wow.

Kisses

K.

Ack!!! There are only 2-3 more chapters left! I'm already going into mourning for this story and it's not even finished yet.

I bet no human has ever treated Itachi the way Sakura did and survive. She's a tough cookie that one.

Kakashi is funny and evasive while still managing to coax information out of others. I think is character is spot-on.

Will Naru have the time to learn all he needs to know in such a short period of time? Will Sasu devour Naru in body and soul when they are finally alone? Will Itachi be able to put together the pieces on his own with regards to his connection with Pein or will someone have to step in and assist?

Please up date soon. Must. Have. Answers.

YAY for a new chapter!!! i definitely look forward to reading until the end!! Thanks for all the good work!

So happy to have another chappie to read!!

I hope Itachi and Pein work out, it would be nice for Itachi to be happy, for once, for himself

Post soon!

Ooh I am absolutely loving this story, I can't wait to see Danzou get his comeuppance. Speaking of which someone should wake Itachi's father up as well, he deserves an ass whipping himself for the torment his sons have had to endure due to his selfishness, their mother deserves a tongue lashing too, you can't tell me she's that ignorant, or if she is ignorant of the whole thing she deserves an even greater tongue lashing since she was the one who wanted to go to sleep and didn't really give much consideration to her sons, what kind of mother is that. Gah, sorry for the ranting just had to get that out, it would be funny though to see them both get the most indignant wake up call and then receive a major tongue lashing from their sons. I love your characterisations though and the way things keep us guessing. Neji as a Watcher was a great call and it was nice to finally discover what happened with Pein and Itachi. I was mad at Konan for her small part but you can't help but like her either, sure it was a bit selfish of her but she wanted a happy ending too, she's a great character. I love Naruto and Sasuke's interactions even though Sasuke went rather insane for a while lol, they are just too cute and Itachi's devotion to his brother and attachment to Naruto because he lost his own bond mate without even knowing it is also sweet, forever the protective older brother. Love it, love it, please continue I can't wait for the next instalment.

Oh noes! That's so sad! At least it wasn't Itachi's fault. Cannot wait to see what's coming to Danzo.
Great chapter!!

Oh okay, now we know the relationship between Itachi and Pein. Thank you, now we got a background check :).

This chappie was great!!! So Itachi didn't betray Nagato!!! Thats so fantaastic!!! Perhaps now they can have a start over!!! Oh I so hope that Danzo will pay!!!
And the pic is great too!!!!
See you again soon!!!!!

P.S. I love this story sooo much!!!! I'm always doing a happy dance when you update!!!!
And each chappie is not the way I expect it too be!!! I love unpredictable storys!!!!

Oh boy. The reckoning cometh. Danzou has a lot to answer for.

Its interesting, because if I am remembering correctly, Naru & Sasu met their first time in a similar way that Tachi and Nagato met their second time.

Will Pain share this newfound knowledge with Tachi? He should be made aware of the transgressions his father and Danzou committed against the two of them.

Can't wait to see what happens next.