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for Midnight Memories

by Daydreamer79

schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes! this is phenomenal. the writing style, and amount of work you put into this is just wonderful. Absolutely loved.
person smint45
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so fantastic!!!! I'm so happy they are together finally and that Sasuke is remotly sane!!! I really start to like pain!!! i can't wait for him and Itachi to come together!!! Itachi really needs one to relive him form his Sasuke obsession ^^ I thank you so much for the fast update!!! I absoloutly love this story!!!! Thank you soo much and see you again soon!!!!
person Talltree-san
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, this story is getting really deep. And I'm loving every minute of it, this is the best Sasunaru I'm reading yet!!
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I was blown away by how deep this chapter really is. I didnt understand the chp 14 so had to go back and reread 13 to get a grasp of what was happening again. So...Naruto is a watcher now? and what will happen with danzo. I get the sick gut feeling that he's not stopping until he gets his way..
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the quick update. Love it, love it, love it. The finger to Danzou. Love it.

Are the Watchers a bit like the elementals in The Chronicles of Riddick? They seem able to foresee things and have an airy quality about them.

I was upset with Konan not wanting to even give Naruto a chance, but at least she realized that she was wrong after Pein's insistence and departure.

Neji totally fits as a Watcher since he is Mr. Fate himself. Who is his bond mate I wonder?

Pein's decision to help Naruto - Is this because he has an attachment to Naruto from watching over him, or is it because he realizes that if Naruto dies, then Sasuke dies, which would severely impact Itachi, his own bond mate, in most negative ways up to his own possible death. Could it be for both reasons?

Naruto's last life's friends - Do they know he is dead?

Naruto's body - What will happen? Will they have a funeral?

Does Naruto remember all of his past lives now that he is a Watcher and no longer quite human?

Naruto's uniqueness as a soul/Watcher - If he does not pull his power from the earth, but Sasuke, does that mean he is weaker than the other Watchers? Assuming he will need to be trained, will they have to figure out a different way to do so? Surely Naru/Sasu will not want to be separated during through this period. Also, it is "almost unheard of" the way he kept the same form throughout all his lives... I am interested to see the true significance of this as the story moves along.

Sasuke's understanding of Naruto without him speaking - Will Naruto be able to do the same with Sasuke?

Pein's allusion to Sasuke's strength - Sasuke will be harder to kill now that he and Naruto are more permanent (or do they need to do something further to become truly permanent?)... I can't wait to see just how strong he (and Naruto) will be and how that differs from his normal strength.

Itachi feeling empty - Why did he push away Nagato's bond with him? All of the instances of them previously meeting that Pein speaks of... Does Itachi not remember them because he pushed them away with the bond? It seems odd that Itachi doesn't remember anything though? Could someone have messed with his head and feelings so he would not bond with Nagato?

Poor Pein. Maybe Itachi will now be more open to him/her after witnessing the developments between Sasu/Naru and gaining an understanding of what has really been grind on. Somehow, I don't think Pein will make it easy on Itachi.

Sasuke's fast thinking - I like how rational he seemed to come up a plausible reason for him being locked away by Itachi. Even when he is not well, he still carries a sharp mind. Can't wait to see him retaliate once he is well (or better than before wit Naruto by his side) for Danzou's attempt on the lives of himself and those he loves, as surely Danzou set up Naruto's last death hoping to also take Sasuke down, thereby weakening Itachi enough to take out as well. Oh, also like Naruto's input to explain Sasuke's bout of craziness.

Naruto's recognition of Itachi's love for him - Sasuke is not just paranoid. It’s good that Itachi had a chance to love Naruto in this last life instead of continuing to despising him for putting Sasuke through hell as well as himself by proxy for so long. He will be much more accepting now that Naru/Sasu are more permanently together. Was Naruto aware of this love while living his last life, or did he only recognize it after gaining all the knowledge and wisdom of his previous lives? Or, could it be that he could sense it from Sasuke, since Sasuke already felt it?

I absolutely love this story. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh and...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

Leos Rule!
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Pein, =(.That has to hurt, he remembers each time and because he looked different each time, Itachi didn't remember him....
schedule August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better!! I'm so addicted.
You revealed so much in the last chapter, my head is still trying to catch up. xD
I'm still unsure as to what happened with Naruto. Did his bond to Sasuke break when Pein extracted his soul? Or...? Yeah. I might need to go back and re-read the chapter. Hahaha.
I'm anxiously awaiting the next exciting installment.
person smint45
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absoloutly totally fantastic story!!! I can't tell you how much I love it!!!! But Please tell me there will be a happy end!!!! I can't stand it if naruto and Sasuke as well as Pain and Itachi can't be together!!! It would just be too crul after living through 10 lifetimes!!!! Please I'm beggin you to given them peace in the end!!! Till them let them suffer *says the sadistic bitch inside of me* ;) Well Anyway I think I have to pronounce that this is by far the best story I've ever read!!! This is the biggest compliment I can give this story!!! Since I've read about 400 fanfics it is really difficult to find good ones like all your storys ^^ Please update soon!!! I can't wait for more!!!
P.S. Could you mail me when you update?? My mail is kuraitenschi@web.de !! Thanks!!
person meowkuu2
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is...I'm...damn!!! please write more!! please tell me naruto and sasuke will be together!! please!!!!