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Can you like maybe write one in which Yamato is involved? Teehee!

Hey I know you said it was a one shot but OMG! I love it! I'm drawn to stories about anbu and also stories containing kakashi, itachi, Yamato or Sakura. To have them all together is something I have no words for. I didn't realize it before I read this story but your the author of double edged sword which is currently the only long fic I've read 2 1/2 times. I would absolutely love it if you made this into a multi-chap fic like that! PLEASE make a series! PLEASE?!?

Extremely talented writer and story hot like the burning of a thousand suns. THANK YOU!

lol that was hot i love to read more storys with them .. later for now

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damn you ended it i would love to see all 4 on a mission couse well thats just hot *runs off to finish double edged sword*

I surely hope this isn't the end. I can't believe you put two of my all time favorite characers in one sexy story.

Guhhhh. I still can't read that without becoming incoherent. However, I felt that I must mention two things:

1) A typo towards the end that always distracts me: "All three of them remained tangled together, hearts pounding, hair and skin drenched with sweat with the smell of sex thick ass incense in the air" Other than that, the flow is perfect. It's my fault for being a grammar/spelling Nazi.

2) I HAVE THAT SAME DAMN SHOWER CURTAIN! I got it for Kelsa, and now I can't even look at it without being transported to the Realm of Perversion. Thanks so much for making my showers SO much more interesting.

All I can say is Yum.

Holy fuck, that was beyond hot!! You really need to write more threesomes.

O_O . . . . . Guh. Just . . . . guh.