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person izzychan
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this is one of the best written hets I have ever read. Your writing style is great and your graphic scenes are hot! I don't know if you would do this but I would like to request a Team Seven moresome after reading this latest chapter, or at least a lil Kakashi/Sakura. And as a huge Sai fangirl, I think you got his character perfect especially his awkwardness. Can't wait to read the next installment!
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see Kakashi, as Kakasaku is my absolute fave, but you know ... there just aren't enough Hidan fics out there. It'd be awesome to see HidanxSakura. I also think that, random as it is, the last reviewer's suggestion of Inoichi and Sakura is kind of interesting. The best friend's dad angle does have potential ...

But anyway, you do have some mistakes here and there, but overall I find the stories sexy. For some reason, I think the Shikasaku is my fave ...
person kogasangel
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually a little curious as to see how you would pull Gaara off. I'd be even more interested to see if you could do a Sasuke/Sakura/Itachi. That would be interesting.
person tgreeny1
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey I know this is an obscure pairing, but I think you should do inoichi and sakura next. Have her be fucking her best friends dad would be a very interesting story to read.
person cynaga
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Shikamaru's fingers glided across Sakura's wet folds like a knife through butter."


ouch... maybe another analogy would be better here ~ just sayin
person cynaga
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
These are so well written and entertaining~!

SAI
SAI
SAI


next pls
person Anon
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done! Steamy, wicked...oh yea!
Since you are taking requests.....Shino and Sakura. I love that pairing! Too few out there for the Aburame hunk! You know who else doesn't get too much love? Yamato/Tenzou. Okay, I gave you two...but you do it so well!!!!

Great job!
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should totally do a sequel to the sakura/kiba one that DOES involve Naruto because those lines were the hottest of the whole story.
person adrianna harper
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it
person KakaSaku
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooh, could you do kakashi? i absolutely love him. If not him, maybe Itachi or Sasuke please? I'd love for Kakashi though. I always wait for the next update. Kakashi please!