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for Hurt Me

by gingermaya

person Luxurien
schedule October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing! I love it. Probably the best BDSM KisaIta I have ever read! Thanks for the read :)
person SoulMore
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how often I've returned to reread this. definitely on the upper side of five, so I thought it was about time to leave a review...

I love the quiet trust between them, how Kisame first thought he was getting saddled with a brat and then realized that Itachi is quite capable, how you invented Kisame's background in the Scene (and the image of Kisame having to discipline rowdy Zabuza, that was awesome). Both Itachi and Kisame are absolutely... I hope you (and they) won't get offended if I call them delicious, even if breathtaking might be a better word. Thank you very much for this marvelous read!

Sakiku
person shandy
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely loved this story. it was bdsm as it should always be written, without making me feel dirty or like i just read someone's fantasy.
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please tell me theres more. you cant just leave it there!!!

i mean....
PLEASE DONT LEAVE IT THERE!!

this was really good. if you give me more, i'll give you cookies

*CHIBI Sango gives you cookies as bribe*
person satterb
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy crap! That was wonderful! Very hot. I love when Kisame calls him Kitten. Thanks for this juicy little treat! Keep up the great work!
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm just curious, is this related to Divided Loyalty? Only because you mention something that related to this in the chapter with the "spanking".

I really like this one. It was a more emotionally charged BDSM, and it was different from what I expected. As much as I find Kisame "icky" to look at, I am always intrigued with how you portray him in your stories. And where I first thought it hard to swallow in imagining him in any sexual situation, you've given me the metaphorical "sugar" to make it easier to go down.
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this- I favorited it on Y!gal, and I love it. They're not soft people, but the interaction is intimate and careful, and I love it. You did an excellent job.
person atasi
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was so amazingly well written and in character! I loved it.

I'd love to see you write a sequel to this! And if not a sequel, then at least more Kisame/Itachi. There's not enough love out there for this pairing and you do a wonderful job of writing them. Keep up the good work!
person Ivy
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good development and descriptions! Can't wait for the next chapter ^_^