rate_review Reviews

please for the love of god make more chapters. this is hands down one of the best little stories i've read on this site.

another fantastic chapter, totally worth the wait for it.

I look forward to seeing what will happen next.

Couple of quick questions:
1. Will Naruto hand Sakura out for other people to use, or will he keep her to himself?
2. About what chapter do you think you'll end up introducing Naruto?
3. Is Naruto going to get any other girls, or just Sakura?
4. Will Naruto get together with Hinata in the end? I'd like to see that happen, if you plan on it.

Thank you, and goodbye!

~Leonineus

Truly the greatest peice of smut I've ever read. Granted this is the only site I go to to read smut, and it's full of gay shit, but still, it's a good story. Please don't make me wait another year for an update... please

This fan fiction is great. It's like WOW. Sakura getting a reality check. I love the part about her becoming Naruto's concubine/servant. I hope that Hinata gets in their too. I wonder if Hinata would video tape all the sex that Naruto and Sakura have and critique Sakura's performance. Like if she shows any dignity or she holds back from submitting to Naruto or not thanking or begging to be used. I am sure that Hinata could use those charka whips to encourage Sakura to better perform. Ino could come in and do her family justu on Sakura to make sure she submits fully.Maybe Naruto puts the Booty Call Justu on Sakura so that she will know when she is needed.

Another good chapter, though I am not much of a bestiality fan.

I would love to see Hinata's idea come true, that would give Naruto a girl who loves him and their little slut!

I am confused. Is this another unwarranted bashfic? Sakura *abused* Naruto? Naruto is hardly some poor widdle abuse victim, and in canon Sakura has hit Naruto a total of four times. Read the manga if you don't believe me. As for the anime, Sakura hitting Naruto is done in comedic relief and only when Naruto is truly being annoying. She may have an attitude with him, but Sakura has never abused him in any way. Her snarkiness is one of her character's redeeming points, and what saves her from being a bland character.

If using this was just an excuse to write smut, it was cheap. I tried to enjoy this, but character bashing automatically dooms a fic to me. Seriously, it ruins any credibility your story may have had. Also, Tsunade is *very* OOC, and so is Shizune. Can't say I'm impressed with your characterization skills.

very good, I look forward to reading the next chapter when it comes out.

I love this story and am begging for an update soon.

Write more, please.
SailorNemesis