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for Take Two

by Adi

schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was freaking HILARIOUS. I think my favorite parts all involved Naruto's decidedly selective memory!
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was one of the funniest things i've read. pure gold. i lol'd so much my sister told me to shut up.

great job.

*CHIBI Sango gives cookies for a job well done*
person Mija
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg this was soooo funny and sooo in character, I could sooo see them getting it on like that and their teams not liking each other, omg you had me laughing and getting all excited and then a bit worried for the poor kiddos but oooh wow, just wow, wonderful read and I so thank you for that and for the link to that amazing drawing by Starlighty???? huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person bob665
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Very funny, I would have to say that I enjoy the interaction between Naruto and his students more than Naruto and Sasuke though.
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha! So brilliantly funny! Some of the quips and lines that came out of Naruto's mouth made me crack up out loud!

The lime scene was tasteful yet raw. Very well done.

All in all, a wonderful one-shot. I absolutely loved Naruto's team. The whole story and especially Naruto's rivalry was very much in character. 5/5!!

person Gitty
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant. A hallmark of a great fic for me is me grinning and sniggering like an idiot for the entire thing, and I certainly was XD. Naruto and his team were perfect. It was crazy XD. And Sasuke and his army of mini-Sasuke's was like-wise awesome XD (And that bit about Sasuke going from one weirdo group to the next... for some reason whenever someone points it out, without fail my mind goes to a weird weird musical number dream I had with that Grace Kelly song by Mika only lip scynched by Naruto in a bizarre terrifying musical number featuring everyone on crack and 90% more confused mildly disturbed Sasuke being twirled and wanting none of it. Not sure why. Tangents). PS, wtf your Sai and Sakura had me like this 8D. I don't think there was anyone I didn't love. And Kakashi ignoring everyone and just having an eternal internal porn dialogue going on in his head.

I know it was a one shot, but I think I loved this verse(and Naruto's cute team) so much I'd read more drabbly bits on it.