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Hey !
Sorry if I make any mistake but I'm French. And my English isn't really good... I hope you will understand me ^^
Well, I just want you to know that I really like your fic', you write very well, and.. It's hot ^^
I love Sasunaru, and Naru in dress... Well I like it.
And don't take it bad, I just want to help you, but your French sentence at the end of your fic' is not right, actually, I don't even understand it, maybe if you want to corret it, you can send me an e-mail (I wrote it in the little case, hope you will be able to read it, I never post a review on this site before...) and tell me what you wanted to say, and after, I will translate it for you? I'm better in reading English than in writing ^^
Because in English, what you wrote means "I am a dwelling/home, here where is my pregnant lover?" if you just want to say "I'm home, where is my pregnant lover?" you can say "Je suis rentré, où est donc mon homme enceint?" or "Je suis à la maison, où est mon amoureux enceint?"
Good luck for your next fic' !
Bye

that lemon was hott hott HOTT!! do him in the dress sasuke yea! whoo!