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i love this story

Awesome chapter dude! Keep up the awesome work.

Suggested pairing of Kurenai, Tsume, or Shizune.

Once again, nice chapter. Look forward to future work.

DAMN nice update I loved it!!!!!!!!!!

Alright, now let's see Tsume try to beat Naruto for taking her daughter, only to lose herself.

how about adding new pairing like Kurenai, Mei or even Kushina I mean that ones pretty easy to do.

Did Hinata get a collar? I would so love her to be over Ino and Sakura.It is so nice of Naruto to train the girls in the way of the Slutty Ninja. Could you imagine them doing techniques on each other to make sure that they have it just right. After all they would not want to disappoint Naruto from getting maximum pleasure. Of course if they did it with out permission they could always be punished. I wonder if your going to have all girls move into his apartment building. A little renovation and he could have a master bedroom in the center and the girls rooms around him. Would he create the booty call jutsu? Would one of the girls go with him on missions? Well until next time you update.

HOLY FUCK DUDE! THIS IS MY FIRST TIME READING AN AFF FIC AND LIKE AT THE END OF THE 2ND CHAPTER I RECOGNIZED YOUR NAME FROM FF.NET AND I WAS LIKE HOLY SHIT WHAT ARE THE ODDS OF THAT! AND AS ALWAYS YOUR WRITING IS PLEASING.

Ja Ne!

hmm this is good shit, is this similar to establishing dominance? post this on FF.net too

Well at least naruto is a caring master to his slaves

you´re doing a great job with this fic along the rest of them, really liked how ino was enslaved in this one a sort of reversed hypnosis using her own weapon at her.
speaking of weapons any chance to make tenten and temari in one chapter both are good to be in a single chapter, and since they both use weapons using against them like bondage for tenten and a spanking treatment for temari with her iron fan shall be enslavement to behold.
if youre going to add tatuya(please :3 )then she will give naruto a strong challenge since of her strong nature shell be pretty difficult for naruto to enslave her and make her part of the harem, also about the contest it would be an amazing yet perverted to have it as an ending since naruto will have more girls to compete at the contest.
Thank you for updating and hope to see more perverted fics; and one more thing do you take challenges or request because i have a lot of ideas and i´ve been looking for some one to help me with if you can please contact me thank you.