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for Naruto: Harem Shadow

by DFoarile

schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i would have thought having body variation among his women would be more interesting for a master... out fit variation as well. How do they manage having humongous knockers when they need to fight? don't they bounce and get in the way... and cause back problems?
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
no
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When is the next chapter coming!
person dan79
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Takuya of the Sound Four/Five: Age 17

It should be spelled Tayuya
person dan79
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Orihime says, with a sigh, “Wow, Sakura-san! It smells so sweet and it is glowing too! It is so lovely, Sakura-san!” Orihime doesn’t notice the chakra energy going into her body through her body and her eyes starting to become glazed in which she continues to take into the aroma. Orihime says, while her mind becomes foggy, “Seems so good… so smoothing… so wonderful…” She moans and giggles as her chest starts to giggle and she says, “Feeling kind of funny, but… so wonderful, too…” Just then Orihime’s Shun Shun Rikka are engulfed in blue and red chakra energy as her lips start to glow while her breasts and buttocks begins to expand with the rest of her body ‘adjusting’ to the ‘alterations’. Orihime moans quite loudly as her lips become orange-red, her breasts become the size of medicine balls along the shape of them as well as bursting out of her shirt, and her buttocks is now a heart-shape look. Orihime closes her eyes and when she drops the sphere, her eyes open to reveal that have become the same red color as Sakura’s eyes.

This paragraph would make an interesting picture to see and this story has I belive the most diverse harem crossover or otherwise I've seen
person dan79
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story also poses an interesting question what would perpetual shy female leads like Orihime and Aerith be like if somebody gave them confidence andthe love they deserve from thebegining?
person dan79
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fifth Mizukage moans out, “Nallia, Naruto-sama… my name is Nallia…”

Actually the Fifth Mizukage name is Mei Terumi
person dan79
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To me what makes it a good story is that the most important part of Naruto is maintained his compassionate nature.
person dan79
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The last paragraph has an interesting contrast the shy and loyal hinata with the chaotic mask from the mask movies.
person VFSNAKE
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! Naruto is going to have some mega loving from those two. WHAHAHAHA!