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for Naruto: Harem Shadow

by DFoarile

person avatoa
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Everything is going way to smoothly. Where's the conflict? The kick-ass action? There is absolutely no fighting whatsoever!
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I was hoping Ranma would be brought in.
person dad
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Can you have nauto enslave the sailor scouts next
person VFSNAKE
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Naruto is getting laid by so many hot women. Keep it up.
person Liger001
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic, though why did you add kari and davis to the story, and can you Kurenai to the harem.
person VFSNAKE
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES! SWEET! When is Naruto going to get Tayuya? I say he finds her, makes her his slave, and then screws her brains out. LOL!
person VFSNAKE
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Naruto got more hot women. What about Halibel? Or Nel (adult Nel)? Write more ASAP!
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's rather dull to have the same exact sex constantly, especially since all the girls have the same damn figures. Sure large breasts and round asses are nice, but variety is the spice of life. Hell, I think the Mizukage's figure is perfect as is. So was Yoruichi's, Orihime's, Rangiku's, and Tifa's.
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter. Having Tsunade being brought into the Harem was so dam sexy. Also I have other ways you can hypnotize people. You can you belly dancing along with seductive aromas and music. Maybe you can use that on Kurenai. It still would be rather sexy and erotic if you have a snake control by Naruto to hypnotize Anko. The snake could wrapped her up and it will be the start of a kinky and erotic bondage sex theme. I know I said that in the last review but I was just trying to give suggestions. This is after your story, anyhow good luck on the next chapter.
person VFSNAKE
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NICE! Naruto got the Legendary Sucker. Something else Naruto did that Jiraiya couldn't. LOL! When will Hana and Tsume get involved? What about Temari? The sister of the Kazekage has its perks in terms of political power.