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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Good shit! What about Inuzuka Hana? You can't have a harem without her. LOL!
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter. It is sexy and erotic. I think when Anko comes into the story you should use a snake theme to make her Naruto slave. Whether it is hypnosis, a snake biting her or a bondage scene where she all wrap up in snake coils and given the drug to make her a slave.
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was freaking awesome! When Naruto returns to Konoha, Tsunade is going to be like "WTF!" and Shizune will be sent to investigate and be converted to his harem. LOL! Write more ASAP!
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fairly decent story but in all fairness it need some massive editing... I just can't get past some of the sentence structure and poor use of words, as well as just the basic grammatical errors. good concept though it just needs some serious re-editing before you continue posting more chapters.
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME! Will you get Hana or maybe Anko? What about Seras from Helling? Those large breasts and that skirt that just says "look at my fine legs and stare at my firm ass!". Put her in!
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
would it be possible for Eureka from Eureka Seven after she has grown her wings and after the transformation she keeps her wings? if you have never seen the series here is a link to a picture that shows what she looks like in the state that I am talking about: http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r218/animevgirl/Eurekawings.jpg if that didnt show up its http:// i145.photobucket[dot]com/albums/r218/animevgirl/Eurekawings[dot]jpg
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know your doing other Univerce girls now but can you add some of the girls mentioned in the begining (Hoplefully because of Kyuubi Tsunade would be returned to age 20(or so) and hopefully Konan becomes one of the slaves (also Kin would be 16 along with everyone else)
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter. I like that you brought in Rangiku Matsumoto. She one of the hottest characters in Bleach.
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SWEET! Narto got it on with his sexy slaves. Get Sera "Kitty" Victoria frm Hellsing. That would be awesome! Don't forget Temari, Ino, Ayame, and Shizune in order to keep Tsunade in the dark. Also, use it on Tsunade so she can finally be a Mom, and use Kyuubi's chakra to make her young again.
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very sexy chapter. I love how you added Orihime and Yoruichi they are two of my favorite female characters in bleach. This story is so good, please continue it.