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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A good story up until the point where you had Sakura dump all her memories of Sasuke. Fact is that Sasuke is doing the right thing by being EXTREMELY pissed at the village and wanting to destroy them. If I was him and Konoha had done the same thing to me.... GOODBYE VILLAGE, BURNING IN FLAMES!
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I'd personally like to see some Sailor Senshi or Ranma1/2 girls show up. This is looking pretty good so far.
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Thank you for taking my suggestion, I love kaa power of hypnosis and how he coils around the victims body. I love snakes because of the jungle book. I know that a bit disturbing but hey to each his own. The spelling and grammar were good except in a few spots. Like how Hinata said pleading instead of pleasuring. However overall it very good. I how Anko next I love to see her wrap up in bondage wether with ropes or snakes. Good luck!
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is an amzing story and i hope you make more like this plz
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Naruto is getting sex slaves and Hinata is the Queen. SWEET! Can't wait to see who he nabs next.
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and can't wait to see what happens next. I am glad that Naruto will not be an I rule the would type. I thank each of his girls should stay party true to who they are just more submissive. I can't wait to next time. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good. Naruto going to have sex slaves! This first chapter has already caught my interest and I know it going to be a exciting and lust fill story. I hope you try to incorporate snake hypnosis like in the jungle book with kaa. I so looking forward to your next chapter.
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is great! think you can include Samui?
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! That was hot! Naruto getting it on with his slaves and now Sakura joins. Sweet! KEEP IT UP! Get Ino next.