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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love where this story is going please update soon.
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've put way too many idea's into my head.
I want to see the twins. Now. Get writing!
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I want to see the twins. Now. Get writing!
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kitten is adorable. I can just see her enjoying some milk from the other girls!
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one update soon.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NICE! HE GOT YUGITO! Now he needs Temari, Hana, Kin, Tayuya, Karin, and anyone else he comes across. Have Gaara kill Sasuke.
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Haku... What did she ever do to you?
...Ah well, lets see some Temari already!
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...Ah well, lets see some Temari already!
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am a bit upset with Haku being dead, couldn't Naruto have broken her over time to be his loyal plaything? Or made Zabuza discard her and taken her in a moment of vulnerability?
But the scene with Tsunami was all I dreamed of and more, very nice. I suggest Naruto go on vacation to Wave a few times in the future.
But the scene with Tsunami was all I dreamed of and more, very nice. I suggest Naruto go on vacation to Wave a few times in the future.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shame Haku died. She could have been a loyal slave to him if things were manipulated in the right manner. Write more ASAP! What about Hana? Or Tsume?
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not a good chapter, this latest one. You didn't have to make it bloodline stealing, you could make it permanent bloodline COPYING and therefore have spared Haku's life.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter.