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for Lilith's heir

by Necros2303

schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fantastic a bit sad that you dint have haku be another virgen and slave girl but thats ok thanks for sharing please update again a.s.a.l.a.
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome chapter, especially the tentacle monster with Kurenai. I like the idea of Tenten as Naruto's queen, but I can totally see Hinata being her favorite maid since Hinata didn't need much to fall into her role as a slave.
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is fantastic thank you for sharing please update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one.
person VFSNAKE
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Now what about the other girls and women in the Elemental Countries. He could have Shizune and reverse Tsunade's age to take her too. Write more ASAP!
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think Lilith should visit her heir and get to know his girls better. I can't wait to see what happens next, but I suggest that Team Anko goes to Wave so Naruto can get a Female Haku and Tsunami! Plus, if Gato has some girls locked up I can see Naruto freeing them and getting a bunch of sexy maids out of the deal!
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon
person VFSNAKE
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. However, it concerns me that you had Kurenai use a Genjutsu where Naruto felt like he was being treated like that, but I do like the poetic justice behind it, and that Kurenai gets what she deserves. Write more ASAP!
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, very nice catching and taming of Ino. I can't wait to see what else Naruto gets up to in Konoha. Could Anko bring him some older kunoichi to add to his harem?
person Leria
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A good story, but I really didn't like the whole 'bash on Sasuke, bash on Sakura' thing in this story..... just seems like Naruto being a jackass for no other reason BUT to be a jackass.