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for Lilith's heir

by Necros2303

schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, good length, detailed, and well written. Not to mention I just love a submissive Hinata.

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schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You mentioned Kyuubi being used for training, will she make an appearance? I can totally see Naruto putting Hinata in charge of the vixen. I like Ayame as a succubus, very sexy. But I think Hinata also deserves that chance, especially since she's always cared for Naruto. I can see Lilith liking her a lot.
person KaelHyun
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You better let Sakura be apart of the God damn Harem
person nm1716
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Wish for the hpdate to be a little longer. Can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
person VFSNAKE
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! Naruto has got some hot women at his side giving him countless pleasure. I LOVE IT!
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If you don't mind I hope this isn't going to be very gory is it? Because I got a good idea for Sakura, you know how Sakura has a Inner Sakura, well what if Naruto give Inner Sakura a body on the outside that is a domenatrix that is very aggressive to Sakura? While Hinata and the other girls help "tame" Sakura? Please include Tayuya in the "fun" in the future?
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story update soon.
person naruto86
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The thing of making Ayame a Nympho slut was a little too much don't you think, I mean couldn't you have made her a clean girl like Hinata was and have Naruto make her his and not a succubus slut?
person VFSNAKE
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Naruto gets hot chicks and everything. Write more ASAP!