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for Just Like Popcorn

by Jelp

person moodysavage
schedule June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I read this till 6AM & was just too tired to review then, but I have to say... that kiss scene on stage where Sasuke kissed Naruto was the sweetest, hottest,most sensual scene I've read in awhile. Most scenes don't pull off sweet & hot at the same time but that one did. I know people love the smut, but my favorite scenes are the ones that are like this- sweet & hot with the emotions from the characters to back it up. You really do excel at these types of scenes which is why I LOVE your stories!
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh. my fucking god.

You are . . . this is . . . I LOVE YOU!

I'm . . . I just . . . YOU MADE ME INCOHERENT! The plot, the backstory, the teasing, the dialogue, Sasuke's family, the . . . the . . .

THANK YOU. That's all I can say. Never EVER stop writing.
person Taka
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! so fucking awesome!!!!! ::nosebleed:: it was delicious!!!!!!
person Sailor Kismet
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This was sooooo gooooood! I know it was long and it ended in a good way but I can't help wanting more...just like real popcorn. I can't have just one handful. Oh I wish for more stories in this universe from you sooooo baaaad.

I can't believe I've missed all these beautiful updates from you but I was taking a small break from Naruto fanfiction and reading others/watching anime. I need to catch up with you and all my other favorite authors. I owe you all reviews.

P.S.: Belated Congrats on your wedding! I liked your pic on y!gal. Your dress reminded me of a kimono from the back. If you're wondering I'm kismet8 over there.
person Pickles
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!! This story was AWESOME! It was deliciousssss~
Loved the smut-scene, oh yeahhh...... *drool drool* SasUKE ish so sexehh!!! Cx
person SasuNaru723
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“Naruto grabbed the vibrator and pulled it out with a wet pop.”

And then ‘popcorn’ screamed into my consciousness! Ah, I couldn’t help but to laugh and then of course carry on with the rest of the story. Oh and I was cracking up so hard when Sasuke and Naruto were talking back and forth after their love vacation in Kyoto to their band, right when Naruto screamed “- he just doesn't like me because he knows I'm banging your pale white ass!" HAHAHAHAA!! (and for some reason I can hear Naruto growling those words 'pale white ass' possessively even while he's being bitter because he's annoyed). Very well done! I enjoyed this story and I thought you wrote a very good seme Naruto and a very good uke Sasuke. I love either way you write them, Jelp! Take care! ^_^

~SasuNaru723~
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I first thought the combination for the band members was different, but after reading the story I liked it. Good job in keeping the characters canon. Ha, Naruto can't call Sasuke's dad by his first name. *laughs*
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was so cool...ilike it very much....will there be sequel?
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn!
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story! I like the popcorn dream thing...really cool way to think of popcorn! :)