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Interesting. I can't say this is one of my favorite stories, but it is interesting. I do enjoy it. I look forward to the next chapter.

Certainly an interesting take on their earlier prsonalities, their ages are further off than you know though XD still definetly interesting. Nobody here semes to write anything but sasunaru.... which I don't read, so its very refreshing to see a fic about akatsuki members, people on DA seem to have the righ idea but they dont post things here, so thanks for writing this. I also like that you dont use abrasive language, that too is very refreshing. I do definetly think akatsuki stories should have their own subcatagory, so fans dont have to ssort through almost 300 pages of other stuff to find it XD Plannign on updating anytime soon?

My oh my!
This is really good so far!
I wonder if Kisame would get jealous at Itachi's and Deidara's relationship. And if Itachi would start to make trouble because of it? And which one of those two would be on top!? -gasp!-
I also wonder if it makes me weird to want to write fanfic for a fanfic. QAQ

Lol I wouldn't doubt everyone in that organization being a bit nieve, especially when it comes to this... and especially the younger members. Still definetly intersting, and again using the technically correct words for certain things is more than a bit refreshing to see. Personally It's hard for me to imagine Kisame being that cruel, He seems more playfull than anything, but who knows what they were all like back when their hormones first kicked in... lol. Especially since most of them have issues relating to others. That's right sociopaths... all of em, in varrying degrees. I bet half of them at least man pms'd Guys do that, once a month, they get moody. They think we're bad, at least we have the excuse of being in pain... lol.

Definetly curious as to where you're going with this.

And I forgot to ask, your email is hidden and I dont have aol or aim... I'm on deviantart with the same screen name, my contact info is there along with art and such. I also take request and have an akatsiki fic up here, and plan to write more XD I think my email will show up when I post this.

It'll be interesting to see how this relationship develops. Hopefully you won't move too fast and let things take their course.
Good chapter. Keep going!