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You *have* to finish this fic! The tension between Naruto & Sasuke is too irresistible! The fic is all the better for the fact that they haven't had real sex yet. If they were to have sex, then they wouldn't both be as confused as they are now, and there would be less pressure on them to get to the bottom of the mystery. To me, the selling points of the fic are watching Naruto and Sasuke struggle to make sense of their feelings and solving the mystery of what's going on between them and why Sasuke's chakra is leaking into Naruto.

I'm worried that Sasuke is right about the jutsu (or whatever it is) causing most of this behavior and not entirely their real feelings. Naruto claims he's always wanted Sasuke, but until he saw Sasuke in his dream, Naruto didn't want Sasuke any mote than he wanted any other person he came into contact with. In the second chapter he was even confused about being attracted to Sasuke: "He watched the woods, but it was not long before he turned his eyes to Sasuke, instead. Naruto could not figure out why he found his friend so fascinating, but there really was not anything else there to catch his attention. It was probably that damned open-neck shirt; so much skin was right there, out in the open, and he wanted to kick himself, because he couldn't stop staring at it." That description just doesn't match up with Naruto's insistence that he was having erotic thoughts and dreams of Sasuke long before any of this occurred. And of course there's Sasuke's point that it's out of character for him to be so out of control for another person. Where do their real desires begin and end in all of this? And how is this new mission going to complicate things? (Incidentally, I like how you're using the side characters in this. They all have their own distinct personalities and their own issues; it makes them more interesting as characters that way.)

Life is so busy, days get filled up...time just slips away. And what better way to pass that time than to READ THIS STORY! Ok... well I would... if there was more here... sigh. I know...you must have escaped that little box with nothing in it but your computer that all us readers want to put you in and make you type all day & all night. Well, just wanted to let you know that I love reading & rereading your stories and you are an absolutely awesome author. Thanks so much for sharing your stories. Now I do believe I haven't gotten to all your stories yet so I'm off to read some more!

This is soooo good!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to hear what's next. And even if there hasn't been actual sex yet...I like this just the way it is. Building it up like this is very very hot. I like the 'little bit more' each time technique. Hot hot HOT!

man i have been waiting for this to be updated! happy! naruto u should have let him doo it! yout stop with his piece right in position, sasuke has a hell of control there! lol And i cant help it, i have to squeee at sasuke, adorable he just wants to sleep beside naru honey and is worried naruto might not have the same intensity of feelings aaawwww :D hehehe i just had to do it. update soooooon

Chapter 5
I was THRILLED to find this chapter update....so HAPPY!!!
I enjoyed how Sasuke and Naruto interacted and the struggles the go through trying to work through their feelings for each other and how to express themselves!!! Grinning!!! :) This was just so much fun to read!!

Chap. 4
BEGGING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YES!! I WANT MORE!! MORE PLEASE!!!

Wicked grin!!!:)

this is soooo amazing! and so very hot!! hahaha i laughed so hard at the part where naruto was imagining neji's hair and the part about genma's ass! that was just too funny! this story is really good and written in a very original way! i can't wait for more! please update ASAP!!

More, more!! I'm totally in love with this fic. It's plot is very unique and intense. And the dreams are absolutely to die for. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more!! ^_^

i am totally loving this fic

Jealous...you do intimate scene VERY well. Can't wait for more