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for The Price We Pay

by Nescafevh

schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this story for some time and i very much enjoy it. I love the suspense and the sci-fi elements are awsome. I have been checking in once a week for an update and have found none and have wondered if you posted the story elsewhere or have given up on it. Of course I do hope you plan to finish the story but understand if you lost interest in continuing it. Until you say otherwise I will continue looking forward to an update. Thank you.
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh nooo a cliffhanger oh well i loved this chapter and a few of the other new ones i just read thank you for posting and sharing your work with the rest of us who are not as good at writing as you are
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im really happy i started reading this tale i will be waiting for the next chapter and i for one really want to read about that snakes trial and stuff also read more about the other kids that were taken
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a great story!! I just read all 12 chapters in one sitting.
Keep up the good work!