rate_review Reviews

Amazing piece of work, darlin'. I'd have to say I agree with you, to a point, maybe. I think Naruto is clinging too hard to his memory of Sasuke (which isn't completely accurate in the first place when it comes to his interpretation of their past). That's not to say that I don't think he still has a chance, miniscule(sp) as it is, of getting through to the crazy bastard before it's completely too late, but he's going to have to let go of his fantasy views of Sasuke in order to HAVE that chance. Unfortunately, Sasuke has grown up way too fast and been exposed to too much evil while he was far too susceptible to withstand it, so he's no longer the boy Naruto and the others used to know.

Aw, I was shocked. Not only because of the kunai, but from the truth beneath it... That's an interesting question who Sasuke is now, or who he has always been...
Thank you for sharing the story with us.

I was following along considerably well, then the dread hit me. Haha. I like it, but why was Naruto stabbed? I think it is a delicious twist to be sure, but fluff is fun too. Nah. I enjoyed it. :)

-Is dying spazmatically on floor-

WHAT THE FUCK!

You need to put 'Unhapy Ending' in the warnings you....you PERSON!

I was all like 'aaaaw...WHAT?!'

I should also add that I loved it.

i liked this a lot and i agree with the fact that what Naruto sees Sasuke as is a complete illusion anymore when they first started team seven Sasuke was probably actually a good guy and such but as the series goes on Sasuke gets farther and farther from Naruto's image of him and by the time we get to Shippuden Sasuke is a completely different person than what Naruto has made him out to be.

Fascinating.I like the way that it started as a love story and until the last few minutes i tought that it will be a love til the end story but, not. You killed Naruto. For me you killed narutos illusion on that way not naruto himself.And i can't figure out Sasuke but it was kinda interesting to read it. I liked it good job. ( However i hate when naruto is killed so appreciate it)

For one, I usally hate death related stories, yet this one...was just perfection.
Just enough sex, enough love moments, and a good ending.
A sad one, yet it didn't leave me frustrated and confused.
Not that it was predictable, but it made sense.
It really did leave me thinking.
Well anywho, I loved it, and I hope you make more NaruSasu fics along the way :3

While I certainly agree with the premise that Sasuke is not the person Naruto once knew I wonder about the need for the second sex scene.

omg that was so sad... at the end the horrible realization that it wasn't true... that it was all a f***ing lie! at least naruto didn't find out... ;( anyway, i thought the whole time "sasuke is sooo ooc and wtf is he doing suddenly all in love and caring while before that he didn't give a damn".. but at the end it all makes sense, although of course naruto is too good of a person to have realized what a horrible trap he had fallen into... he'd never believe sasuke would truly betray him, even as he watched him do it. damn sasuke, attacking him when he was most vulnerable - that's not even honorable, what kind of a shinobi is he???

anyway, I take the offer for the love slave! XD Good job, the ending was super sad but quite original!