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for Break these Chains

by Darksidedown

person inuspike
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that certainly was a different ending from what I had anticipated. This story was very good; I just wish it were longer. ^^ If it still matters to you, I would love if you posted up the other chapters that you had written/in mind.
person Mija
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful and sad and sweet and I sooo want more, love it, ty ty ty, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa.
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More!!! There must be more.....its so good!
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That........was totally awesome! I loved how that came out. Sasuke was able to be redeemed and never gave up the search for Naruto even when all others gave up! I loved the way you viewed the way the series was going with both Naruto and Sasuke destined to fight and destroy each other and I honestly believe that Naruto will find a way around that like he always seems to. Anyways that was awesome good job!
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“I was told, and I believe every word of it, that we are the product of what they have made us. Our destinies were made for us. Ask Madara Uchiha.”

This is Naruto talking, right? Not Neji? You sure? Cuz I damn well remember Naruto beating the crap out of Neji for believing in destiny talk... And I don't believe Madara of all people would change his mind any time soon. Please, don't take this as flame, because the fic itself was very epic and dramatic in a good way. And I also liked that part with "10 years later" and the "What took you so long"... but it's just... I think this quote is a super OOC when it comes to Naruto - that, and the fact that he gave up and let Danzo imprison him. I'm sorry, but those are the principles Naruto practically LIVES on and I don't think he'd give them up, even if he is in love with Sasuke.

Still, I hope you don't get mad for me saying all this, it's not to demotivate you or anything, it's just my opinion and a different point of view.
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my god.
i am speechless.
this is incredible.
you must continue this.
please!
*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*