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Wow, kinda glad to see Sasuke finally making a move on one of his candidates. Wonder how far this will go. Very steamy!! Keep up the good work!

A rather well-done story that avoids a lot of the pitfalls of other Naruto fanfics I've read, but I have to wonder what it's doing here on AFF.net, when it doesn't seem particularly MA-rated.

Intersting that you actually updated. Seemed like this was going to go with those stories that had great potential but were left unfinished. Thankfully, that's not the case. Another great chapter. I'm kinda rooting for a SasuHina in this but wouldn't be sad to see him explore all his options. This includes Sakura, since it seems like she an important one in this story, what with the tension and all. Looking forward to seeing what comes next. Keep up the wonderful work.

Please let it be Hinata. Have it that they had forgotten about her marrying Naruto.

This was very good for your first try, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Also I didn't see any errors in your story, but it doesn't hurt to check it over once and awhile.

Pretty good so far. looking forward for more.