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by Jelp

person lara5170
schedule September 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't quite sure what to expect when I started to read this but I enjoyed it very much.
person moodysavage
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! I love when Naruto & Sasuke are obsessively into each other and get jealous when other people look like they might be getting too close. And Kakashi figuring out what was going on was just hilarious. And the pretend fighting & people not knowing they were best friends lol I loved when they were so shocked to find out things like Naruto knowing Sasuke's favorite food. And their plans!!! lol Darnit' I'm rambling because I keep remembering so many different details and scenes I liked. Like when Sasuke laid on top of Naruto & they kissed...that was so sweet it gave me tingles. Followed by them arguing about who would bottom first!?! That was so hilarious! Ok...I'm now going to go giggling off to sleep now. Thanks sooooo much for doing what you do so well!
person Taka
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!! this was soo beautiful!!!! ToT i want more of this store!!! it soo specail! lol best comical relief as the comment kakashi left! i could help but lmao out loud! my bf was just look at me like i was crazy...XD
so worth it!!!! that was a really awesome story!!!! fantasic job!!!!
person Camui
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bawwwwhh I almost wish it wasn't done. ;( Oh well.

Great ending. :] It tied in perfectly.~ Haha, poor Kakashi! Figures that pervert would be pilfering around reading slash stories... pervert... xD;

This is definitely one of my fave AU NaruSasu fics. :] I thank you muchly for writing it and uploading it! (cuz I know that even when an author writes something, it doesn't always get published... *guilty* e_e)


Camui
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice :D . This was fantastic! I especially loved the scene in the cafeteria when Sasuke was flashing and Naruto picked it up. Very cute.
person ALovingAbscurity
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As sad as I am to see that this story is over, I loved every chapter in it! I hope you consider doing a sequel!
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The one thing I always love about your stories is that you try to keep your lemons believable and I love that. Their first time should have been just like that, it takes an experienced person to be able to delay orgasm and I'm glad you played this lemon in just the right way....Bows down humbly!! Thanks for sharing another fantastic fic.
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH My Gosh, it's one a.m. where I am and I just about died laughing hysterically t how awkward and yet, still smexy that sex scene was (imagine a girl hunched over, staring intensely at the computer which lit up her dark room with blue light, and then suddenly that girls laughs out loud. Yeah, that's me).

Only you would make Naruto and Sasuke fight over who would bottom. And then that bit when Kakashi reviews Sasuke's story and passiely asks Sasuke to remind Naruto for his doctor appointment?

Gold.

Love It Like Always,
Sara
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol hhehehehehhe =^^=

What an adorably happy ending!! <3 ^^
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An amazing end. But why is Kakashi reading those stories o.O rofl I love that part ^_^