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for Like Ninja Fighters

by Jelp

person Camui
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH FUCKING CHRIST GOD DAMN IT REALLY!?! REALLY!?!?!!??! REEEAAAALLLLYYY!?!?!??!?!
...
you are an evil, evil person.

I love it.
make me a masochist, baby.
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:D

Perfect.
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG LOVED IT!!! i can wait to see what happens!!!
person YojiKato
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really do love this fic. I'd say more, but I don't have the time. Keep up the good work. ^_^
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wha! So good love the story & the new chapter. Love all the tension between them & the false starts and stops. Keep up the good work.
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol can't wait!
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oi..it's like pulling teeth girl...I'm at the edge of my seat and think..."Yes!!! They are finally going to kiss"...and then zip, nada nothing...you're killing me with the suspense...Good job!! Leave me wanting more...
person Bluesake
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. I'm glad they are realizing their feelings. I love the whole video game crave parts ^^x
person mrwonderwall
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I love how they are about to realize that they are meant to be (Sasuke already has but Naruto hasn't).

Well, hopefully you wont keep us waiting for long (I love authors who update more than once a year) and start showing some of the boys way of loving each other! And im not trying to be nasty, I just want a kiss. I know they have one but the one where they kinda become official, at least to each other

love,
mrwonderwall
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lmao! i swear the ending is soooo damn funny! priceless! i really think that if sasuke and naruto were real kids that would get their attention the fastest =)