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I'm loving the flashbacks!
Keep going!

aww poor little sasuke-kun.

*sighs* I must say, I am thoroughly enjoying this. It has everything. Anticipation. Humor. Embarrassment. Curiosity. Minor violence for silly reasons (totally loved that by the way. Wish I'd have thought of it back in highschool)... And, let's not forget... two boys kissing. Hehe. It's a difficult time for people, discovering their sexuality, and I think you're presenting it well. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work. ^_^

Reading the last chapter reminded me of how I became a fan of fanfiction. Seven years and counting since I went looking for a Sailor Moon anime spolier and stumbled onto a Marsh Angel story. Wow.

Please don't take this wrong way, but reading this is like reading a NavyBlueWing's story. What I mean is that her stories explore first love, from curiosity about attraction to the first kiss and so forth. I don't know how to write this without sticking my foot in my mouth so I will stop and say that this is a very sweet story. It is about growing up, self discovery, and affection and love. Where will their relationship go, we will find out as the story progresses, how it started was one that touched the heart of every fanfiction lover and made us smile in the memory of where we were when.

This is a very good story and I look foward to your next chapter.

Sean

Damn you Jelp. You got my fangirl senses revved to full gear with this chapter. I could not suppress the squeal of joy at reading their sweet yet awkward first experimental kiss. Damn you. I feel horribly embarrassed when things bring out the girly girl in me. (I also suffer similar embarrassment when visiting Cuteoverload.com. So goddamn cute.)

Keep up the good work!

lol. awwwwwwww

lolz~~ Chpt 1 is so cool! This is a plot that i believe I have not seen it before! It's so cute and funny! Imagine, get suspended just to stay at home to play game?! If this story is published during my school days, I think I am going to learn from them.

I caught that little hint when the boys were discussing the story of the game to their characters and the moment I heard, I think it was Naruto, say that Juno was the Emperors' son, hence Naruto's character -yes I got that hint message. I was like, "Hell yeah it's taken Kishimoto FOREVER to finally revel in the manga that Minato, the Yondaime of Konohagakure, IS Naruto's biological father!" Yeah, it took way too long for that knowing secret to finally be released out. Oh and I feel like such a doofus for assuming the "incident" was going to be the boys getting sexually involved with one another, so when it was reveled that the "incident" was only a kiss, I was very surprised but thought of their silly embarrassment over the kiss to be cute. They were so tense and worried before they, in slow motion, locked lips. Like I've praised before, I just adore this story more and more.

aww man this is totally awesome! its very funny! i can't wait for more!

I honestly want to say something but I can't. I just keep thinking about Kaashi's face when he caught them and I keep giggling - a teehee!

Good times! Good fic!