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by Jelp

person SasuNaru723
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better! And I did enjoy reading Sasuke and Naruto's first encounter with one another. When I read near the ending of chapter 2 about them reading fanfiction and doing what their character were doing, hence the naughty I'm guessing, I was just laughing and said something around the lines of "they're so obsessed with their other personas." I'm excited to see what will happen in chapter 3!
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol

When fanfiction goes too far. ^^ See, this is why there is an age restriction on these things. hehehe

Keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oo I love this fic, can't even tell you why, but does it really matter? :D Please update soon I wanna see exactly what has gotten the two "brothers" in trouble!!! XD Great job!
person qwerty
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you did the background to this story - close enough to the original but with a twist. Are you going to do a flashback to the time that Kakashi saw them doing *something* in Sasuke's room?
Great chapter! Keep going!
person blasterblurby
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really like it, and can't wait for more!
person SasuNaru723
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm already enjoying this story and want to read more! I have to say that I like how the story has Sasuke and Naruto as students and not ninjas in "Naruto." Plus, I would have not guessed they were fighting for the sake of game time. They’re definitely game addicts that would do anything to finish their favorite game (Heh. I'd do the same if it were for my favorite video game, too). What a great first chapter to start off the story Jelp because I'm already hooked! ^_^
person Charm and Strange
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this! The idea of Sasuke and Naruto starting fights to play video games is too funny...it's totally what would happen in the real world as long as Sasuke got lots of therapy in between ^_^
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol the things boys will go through to play their games ^_^
person lyron713
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
leave it to Naruto and Sasuke to get suspended to have a lot of free time to play video games. And it actually took Kakashi two years to figure it out, well I guess he does have to work right. Really like the beginning chapter. Your stories really make my day and give me something to chuckle about for the rest of the week usually. Am looking forward to the next chapter, how often are you going to post since it is pretty much done already?
person Vsan
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's been 7 months since I've liked a fresh fic (as in, seriously new, no more than 3 days old) so much So, are you going to write the rest all at once, and then post it? I would prefer it to be that way, even if I have to wait longer. As long as I can see the end....