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Hahaha I'm so glad that Naruto called upon Kyuubi and used the Kyuubi's chakra to burn Sakura. She'll never be the same! Serves that bitch right! God I hate Sakura... 

First off this maybe late but I so love your story. I almost cried when naruto died... I think the story hurt even more in the end with your last notes. I am so glad your a good statistic and not a less fortunate one.

Re-read this for the 3rd time and it still made me cry. You are fantastic.

I remember reading this years ago. And it is still as beautiful as the first time I read it. Thank you so much for sharing the story with us!

Ok. So. I have only two things to say about your story, and no matter what it sounds like at first, they're both good.

I hate you because you made me cry off and on through the last 5 chapters.

I adore you because you made me cry off and on through the last 5 chapters.

Ok, so I have 3 things to say. PLEASE don't stop writing if you can help it. You are an amazing author with a tremendous amount of talent. I can't say I've read any stories where Naruto DIES-dies. The story was addictive, beautifully written, and that twist towards the end was beyond unexpected. I can't come up with the words to describe how much I enjoyed reading Constellations, so this review will just have to suffice.

I first read All In and cried and raged at Sakura more times than I can count!! I find it such an emotional roller coaster and the pain it makes you feel just about knocks you out!!! I started reading it and just coudn't stop!!! Then I came here right away and went to chap 14 to go on with this story looking forward to a spin that would make up for all the grieving I felt in reading All In....All In really pushed and pulled my emotions all over the place and me crying for a ray of light that it would get better!!

I've read this for awhile and was getting sadder the longer I read it.....have to admit....I had to take the chicken way out and jumped to the last chap. and back track.....(I should have realized the truth before ......when ever my sister loves a story and cries about it but does not tell me a hint....it usually means someone I adore is going to die.) I'm glad I read it this way....other wise you would have heard my crying and begging for it to go how I expected it to be. I just feel my heart break every time Naruto tries to push them together and live in the pain hes living in cause he's doing it for Sasuke and Sasuke's future. I can't handle Sasuke's ease in wanting Neji there with them. It just screams such a betrayal to Naruto that I find myself wishing Naruto to just say screw you and leave both Sasuke and Neji to themselves as they seem so happy together. Naruto is in pain and it just kills me!! (I know from experience what its like to live with someone that cheats on you with others and it kills you inside and you try to pretend your don't see whats going on and that your ok and its not bothering you and keep living just to keep your family together. Ugh just shoot me)

I just think Loraney that you are an amazing woman and mom and I can only admire your personal courage, strength and the skills you have in life and in writing stories that cause your readers to FEEL the trendous emotions that you create with your words!!! You've made me cry and grieve many times over this week and bring up emotions that to review earler was just too painful to do. You know those moments that you can't even put into words just how much something makes you feel!! You have a wounderful gift with words and I can't thank you enough for putting up your stories here for the rest of us to read!!

I pray for your health and happiness with your family and hope you know how much we your readers love you too!!!I just love your works....even if at the moment I want to stomp all over a certain Uchiha....sniff...T_T...sniff but still its AMAZING!!!! I look forward to all your future works!!! :) Please never stop writing!!!! Ok back to Constellation.....have to go back to where I was to read on....be forwarned...may have to come back and tell ya how much I want to stomp all over him I stopped where he sees Naruto's fake smile mask due to his and Neji's shower thing.....makes me cry each time I read it....pure torture Naruto is going through.

Chap. 23 Sasuke and Neji all over each other and Naruto watching just breaks my heart!!! T_T

Chap. 24
No. Stop.”

“What’s wrong?”

“Can’t you feel it? He needs us.”

This just broke my heart!!!

Runs off to have a good cry!!! T_T

I have read both of the versions and they were amazing! I'm so glad that I read them both! Thank you for such wonderful stories!

I have to first say I read All In before Constellations. I loved the 1st half and then hated hated hated Sakura with a passion. I loathed Sakura. So I was ready to read the alternate story. At first I thought Neji was going to die by sacrificing himself for the men he loved. But as soon as Naruto accepted Neji when he was on the roof... I knew. I knew it would be Naruto that died. He is the hero afterall. And I cried off & on for hours while I read your story. I love everything Naruto was and everything we held important and sacrificed himself for. He always put those he loved first. This was a beautifully written story. It's like I know & care about this family and ache for their pain. This story actually affected me like Mercedes Lackey's Last Herald Mage series which I've read so many times I've lost count. And when I want to care for a story again... I know I'll be rereading this again and again. Thank you so much for all you put in to this. And I'm so glad for you own successes again your own cancer.