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Man, Sakura got BURNED!!!!! I love it!!!

This was a great chapter, a lot of character development for Sasuke; his brother, the orphanage, and with Naruto. Great work!!!

PS, my account name on y! is EarthDragon888

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YOU LIE!!! Who says it offers no progress towards the story? A whole lotta progress for me LOL... for instance the banshee is an idiot and has it all wrong, wheee and awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww bwaaaaaaah to all the tea-shop moments and thereafter...and they seem to be working as well on Sasuke's training - breeleant progress in my books LOL

This really has me intrigued and practically hanging on the edge of my seat, I'm so afraid to admit just how fragile this leaves me. Hope you manage to update frequently, thank you

I REALLY REALLY REALLY WANNA SEE A FIGHT BETWEEN SAKURA AND NARUTO. That evil witch needs to learn her place and know she's weak compared to him and Sasuke!

Lol, done ranting! Great work as always!!!

Very few stories touch me the way they used to when I first discovered the FANDOM, the way they wrestled my heart almost out of my chest, the intensity of emotions, the depth of characters etc and you've brought it all back.

This is so well written, thoroughly entrenched in the characteristics that are Sasuke and Naruto, I'm firmly ensconced in the SasuNaru camp but I love the fragility of this seme Naruto, his insecurities and his almost limitless power and strength albeit only physical.

Absolutely amazing, Sasuke in his posessiveness, brilliant scheming - shall we say end of year? BWAAAAH Classic!

Yellow flag in Sakura arrggh, want her gone! LOL
Neji is beautiful :)

Sasuke is hott I like how you have him still tough and a teme through and through even though he's uke LOL

I can't wait for the continuation. Is there a particular angle constellations and all in are aiming for? I'd like to take the route safer for my heart LOL

Please continue to write, I've not emotionally invested in something for quite a while and the slew of incomplete works still really hurts :)

Honestly, brilliant thus far...thank you!

Well so much for a peaceful time for the guys....leave it to Sakura to come in and ruin what would have been a hot scene!! I can just see the headlines for the next news paper...Extra read all about it...Broken hearted wench tries to murder future Hokage..

Sakura is going to be trouble. Her words were way harsh. It makes me wonder what happened to make Sakura react so negatively to Naruto. Even in the earlier chapters she was belittling of him. I feel like something must have transpired in the past that she would jump to calling him a monster, even if she did think he was about to rape Sasuke.


Keep up the great work!

Oh man Sakura...way to be a witch!!!

Awesome update!!!

I doubt any issue with Sakura is over once she get her bearings.

loved it great chapter :)