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by momhuey8

person Synph
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It took me hours to read this. Once I started, I just couldn't do anything else, I didn't want to do anything else. It isn't often that I get so involved in a story in the Naruto fandom that the world just slips by me as I read, but you've managed to do that with this amazing story.

I cried several times as I read and I kept having to wipe the tears off of my face before they dropped down to my keyboard. But they weren't always tears of sadness. I cried because this was amazing. I could find no fault with the masterpiece that you have written. Everything was amazingly written and nothing could have been taken away.

I'm very glad that I stumbled across your work. I've never been more in love with a story like this and I know that I'll keep coming back and rereading it for a while.

Thank you for sharing this story
person midnight essence
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are beyond an amazing writer. I read both stories and I must say that the two decidedly different directions were wholly needed. I laughed and was angry with "All In" and I cried like a baby with the sunshine in "Constellations". I would really like to know how you came about with the decision to follow two paths after chapter 14? And as I read Constellations(after having read All In) I thought many times that I knew where we were heading but you keep me surprised and hanging on to my seat and actually not stopping sleep or anything before I finished this to the end.

I also want to thank you for opening yourself and experiences to the world in this artwork known as Constellations.
If you like chat or anything to appease my questions on your fics; my email is missbri88@hotmail.com
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow. i mean wow. i read this in a day and im stunned, it is such a heartfelt and moving story that i completely forgot they were anime characters and were true people struggling with something that we all face. i am glad to have read this and happy that you posted it. very moving and even though a part of me died when naruto went i knew there was hope for the family even if it seemed well hopeless. thank you again for this story.

:D
person kinai26
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for writing both Constallations and All In One - I know both stories must have meant much to you, I could feel the pain, suffering...and the hope and love. I´m glad that you are alright and wish you all good in life from now on - thank you.
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*bows low* my mother is getting the test to see how her cemo went on Monday. i had moved out of state 4 years ago and had just come home back in July she was told in Aug and they opreated in Sept. i now ware a pink band for her. im glad you are cancer free and can also tell you that this tale is one that has kept me going when im a state away from her in her time of need. i have had to be the rock for her and my father while being close to the coast. thank you for sharing something so personal to you with the rest of the world.
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I'd like to say that I'm glad your cancer is in remission. Moving on to your story...

It felt too short, and too long at the same time. I don't know if I'm making sense or not, but there's something about the last set of chapters that felt too long, but other parts felt too short. Also, some parts were unnecessarily long that I felt could have been shorter. I really enjoy your stories, really, I do... but for some reason, 'All In' needed to be lengthened and Constellations could have been shortened.

All in All, very good, and I look forward to your future works.

By the way, I'm glad you've decided to write a SasuNaru fic with Sasuke in stiletto heels and Naruto in a wedding gown. ;D
I'm totally kidding of course. ;)
person richon
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy reading this story? i couldnt' stop crying when naru died. i was so sad but the next chapter remember we are not alone. take care and se you soon with another story !!
person Chanii
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I simply adore you....Completely and utterly adore you.
person Anon
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for this story. I loved both from the beginnig and I cried buckets and laughed and cried again. It was lovely. I am 39 years old and I have lost a few people to cancer in my life, as well as seen family members over come the bitch that is cancer. That is the reason that I am now enrolled in an Accelerated Nursing Program, my own encounter with cancer and what it can do has altered my life, and surped me to become a nurse who will specialize in Oncology treatment....I have to do my part to help those who have to fight that fight.

I respected you so much as a writer now I respect you as a strong person, willing to share such a hurtful time of your life with us.

Always Humbled by you.
Sukenaru
Kanazerosukenaru
P.R.
person Anon
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just left you an annon. Review...sorry should have logged in....didn't want you to think that I did not want to leave my name on that review. Thank you so much for sharing...

Your Humbled Fan!