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for Constellations (complete)

by momhuey8

person Dorkchic
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to hear about the prognosis and hope that you have many happy healthy years ahead of you. As for the story... Well, several of the chapters literally made me sob like a baby. It was told in such a personal, intimate way that I could not help but empathize and, as a result, feel their pain. The only thing that I do not wish that you had ended it with Naruto's death. Instead I would have liked for you to end it with a reunion with Sasuke. I loved the chapters showing how the family coped and went on after his passing, but something in me called for the unbridled mushiness that would be the reunion between soulmates- be it in some version of heaven or as reincarnations. I guess I was just hoping to know that they did find each other again and were able to be together forever without all the suffering.
On a lighter note- I kind of hope that Sakura was reincarnated as a dung beetle.
person Dorkchic
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Small correction. I accidentally left out a word in my last review which makes it mean something different than what I intended. What I intended to say was that I was not upset that you ended the story where you did. You had commented that so people had said that you should have ended the story with Naruto's death. I just wished that you had continued the story a little further to the reunion. Sorry for any confusion my wording may have caused.
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have loved this story from the start. I'm sad to see it end, but all things do :/ I'm happy that you are cancer free *hugs* Neji's breakdown was so expected, he has been the rock of the family for so long.
person Jit Jones
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the greatest stories I think I have ever read. It made me cry through the last few chapters, but it was impossible to tell if it was because I was happy or sad. The characters were written in a way that made them seem so real, it was like you could reach out and touch them. That was what drew such an emotional reaction. It never would have had that impact if we didn't love every aspect of the characters, and that can be hard to pull off. You did so flawlessly. This was absolutely beautiful, Thank You for giving us this wonderful story.
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had cancer once too. I am cancer free now too.

Congratulations.
person Tinachan
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi I read all of your fic before to send you a review .So that is my opnion, the fic was very well elaborated, all the history since the first chapter got growing with imaginatiom and a great dose of reality .

During the time I was reading it I could feel that you were sharing a bit of your life with us.
And after to read the last chapter and your note I could understand the feelings that you past to me.

So thank you for share your soul with us, and the idea of MEMORIAL was great becouse we become imortals since someone can remember that one day we had lived here and had observed the same constelations that they are observing today...

Thank you

Kisses and Hugs

Tina
person LadyWolf
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is great story! I've read this from the beginning and waited each week for a new and exciting chapter to post...

I nearly cried when the main character died, I usually do not read death fics, but this fic is not about death but about life and how you go on with you life with those you love surrounding you.

I am so happy that you are cancer free...may all your days be as blessed as the next...

Once again Great Fic!!!
person Kerrisa
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo! Darn these people from learning from their mistakes!!! *throws a mini tantrum* Sasuke is not going to like this at all! But at least he got rid of one base. I'm interested in finding out how you're going to explain who these people are, why they are after his demon, and how they are pulling it off. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
person chickigirl
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU'RE ACTUALLY GOING TO KILL NARUTO!!! *crying* plz plz plz plz plz plz plz don't kill him! I don't think I could stand it. They were all finally starting to be happy together! this story is awsome plz keep writing!
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is Sakura at the bottom of this mess? Due to the other story being complete I just realized that she could still be a factor :/