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damn man. poor naru!

i hate the council. i do love sasuke's idea about the prison though

I freaking love this story. I love how you wrote this last chapter - so amazing.
Keepgoing!

awww awesomeness

lmao good grief!

lol. i loved it! very funny!

There were a lot of typos in this chapter. However,

No fucking the villagers. No fucking the villagers. No fucking the villagers.

lol last line is the best! i was gonna wait to review till it started to change but i just had to say that! and good grief! naruto's language!

I forgat to review before but I nearly peed in my pants about Kyuubi and Naruto's testicle. That was hilarious! Really.

I always like a softer Sasuke and this tatooed Naruto is Sexy!!!!

This is wicked! I love it. Not many writers consider the possibility that Sasuke could simply mature and change his mind. I found it interesting how Orochimaru's actual downfall was his inability to understand others on an emotional level. That bit about Sasuke having always followed his heart was quite original. Most people take the perspective that Sasuke has always ignored his heart but now that you bring it up, most of his decisions have certainly not been based on logic. His path has been anything but reasonable. He really has been emotionally driven. It's a rare thing to see that acknowledged in such a way.

And it's really great to have Naruto's vulnerability recognized without turning him into a whiny sobbing little uke. I love your powerful, foul mouthed Naruto. ^^ It's so great to me that he behaves as a real ninja too, that he doesn't shy away from killing an enemy. I also think this take on his reaction to Sasuke really suits his personality. Plus, wonder of wonders, you didn't ignore the issue of Sakura's crush, and yet she doesn't come off as a completely obsessive psycho... Not yet at least.

Anyway I'm enjoying your multidimensional point of view in this story so far and I can't wait to see more. Great work!!