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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
((He hadn't been vigilant enough, but that was over))
At least now I know why you had Sasuke soooooo stuuuupid earlier in the story--to so easily dismiss sakura and to only "wonder" if she would leave them alone; instead of taking action to make certain she didn't interfere in their lives.
Because you wanted sakura to be the bad guy in hiding while the heroes were stupid.
The first 14 chapters were wow; but since i don't like sakura and it didn't seem like you were going to have them catch on anytime soon...i skipped ahead 11, 12 chapters to discover i was right. you must have filled sasuke and naruto's lives with lots of unhappiness and horrible things--glad i skipped to the end. I would have hated to read that many chapters of clueless good guys being beaten down.
At least now I know why you had Sasuke soooooo stuuuupid earlier in the story--to so easily dismiss sakura and to only "wonder" if she would leave them alone; instead of taking action to make certain she didn't interfere in their lives.
Because you wanted sakura to be the bad guy in hiding while the heroes were stupid.
The first 14 chapters were wow; but since i don't like sakura and it didn't seem like you were going to have them catch on anytime soon...i skipped ahead 11, 12 chapters to discover i was right. you must have filled sasuke and naruto's lives with lots of unhappiness and horrible things--glad i skipped to the end. I would have hated to read that many chapters of clueless good guys being beaten down.
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
((“You are so fucking hot when you’re crushing old people’s dreams and ambitions under your heel.”
“Hot enough to let me bend you over the Hokage’s desk and…”
“That’s still my office…” The two laughed as they heard Tsunade yell from the other end of the hall. “And my desk.”)))___
You do funny, snarky and sarcastic dialog just as well as you do emotional, hot-sex and every day dialaog. Good Ending. Thanks for sharing
“Hot enough to let me bend you over the Hokage’s desk and…”
“That’s still my office…” The two laughed as they heard Tsunade yell from the other end of the hall. “And my desk.”)))___
You do funny, snarky and sarcastic dialog just as well as you do emotional, hot-sex and every day dialaog. Good Ending. Thanks for sharing
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
totally cool! dont' know if you are planning a sequel, but if so, you have my vote! thank you for this story!
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! One story finished, the other still, I guess, has a way to go.
Anyway, happy endings all around! Congrats on finishing All In! Keep up the good work! :)
Anyway, happy endings all around! Congrats on finishing All In! Keep up the good work! :)
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol!! That was an awesome ending!! Yay!! Thank you for sharing it with us! Lol I loved Sasuke in here too xD Lol I think the most I have ever liked the councilors was in that last bit of dialogue xD Rutabagas xD I'm looking forward to the next creations you put forth! =D XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh sasu and naru are too good with sakura !! I want to know how is the child of naru. I really enjoy reading your story. see you soon with another one
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
haha! nice ending!
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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
can this GET ANY BETTER!!!!! geezo, well done! not sure how i feel about sakura's "punishment" in this fic, but it does sound like something naruto would want.
good job, and thanks for updating so regularly!
good job, and thanks for updating so regularly!
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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really said that it's over! But this was a phenomenal story! Really, it's one of my favorites!
Great job!
p.s. Is there any hope for a sequel??
Great job!
p.s. Is there any hope for a sequel??
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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
damn that would have been a hot set right there right on the desk lol