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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly intense! Great job here!
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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shouldn't someone be tracking Naruto's movements for the last chunk of time? If nothing else they can use it to narrow down a list of suspects to those he sees on a regular basis. Someone that has the ability and the one on one access to Naruto to perform such a delicate task. That is, of course, if the jutsu is in any way time-consuming. I am assuming that it is not something that can be done in two seconds while waiting in line at the ramen stand.
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November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
just wanted to say that I really like your story (both endings , actually)...
PLEASE write again soon !!!
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PLEASE write again soon !!!
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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! Another great chapter! I hope you get a chance to update soon! :)
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. You know, I stopped reading this story for a couple chapters because I thought Sakura's genjutsu was what Sasuke ACTUALLY DID. God. I love Sasuke, but I was going to have Orochimaru rape him if he'd really done that. Thank God Sasuke realized it.
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so, so, so glad the mind games are over now. And you're right, it's only three chapters, but it was just so disgusting, I think I really would've been sick if I had to read more of it. I still would've though XD
Oh, I really enjoy the angst though XD Although I must admit I prefer Sasuke angst. It's sorta more... in character I guess, however the circumstances you've created -makes- this in character.
Oh, I really enjoy the angst though XD Although I must admit I prefer Sasuke angst. It's sorta more... in character I guess, however the circumstances you've created -makes- this in character.
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Those were some intense memories! Excellent work!
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been following both stories and I think they are amazing.
Screw everyone else who thought the attacks were taking too long. I loved them (in a morbid kind of way) and actually thought we would see more. Lolz, the way you wrote this absolutely amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe now Sasuke will find out it was Sakura's fault, the little whore. (I really don't like her >.<)
Loves!
Screw everyone else who thought the attacks were taking too long. I loved them (in a morbid kind of way) and actually thought we would see more. Lolz, the way you wrote this absolutely amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe now Sasuke will find out it was Sakura's fault, the little whore. (I really don't like her >.<)
Loves!
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! oh i really hope naru will be okay soon. i think it's just hard for fans to see him brought down the way he has been and so they don't like it. i must say i did feel bad for naru mostly because his insecurities are relatable and its hard not to put yourself in the characters shoes sometimes.
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The emotions are worse because emotional wounds are harder to heal than physical wounds so what Sakura is doing IS worse. Since Naruto is physically so strong, it's jarring to see a damaged Sakura overcome him so effectively.
It was disturbing (but necessary to the plot) to read how Naruto was trying to kill himself via stabbing/slashing his body in order to "free" Sasuke.
Great chapter. Cannot wait for Tsunade to fix this and for Sakura to get what's coming to her.
Keep going!
It was disturbing (but necessary to the plot) to read how Naruto was trying to kill himself via stabbing/slashing his body in order to "free" Sasuke.
Great chapter. Cannot wait for Tsunade to fix this and for Sakura to get what's coming to her.
Keep going!