rate_review Reviews

By the way. I am actually reading both stories. I am continually impressed with how you are able to draw in the fans of both light and dark...especially considering you are doing it with two stories that had identical beginnings! Also to be able to evoke different, yet equally strong emotional responses is indicative of an excellent writer, please keep it up! I am on pins and needles on both counts!

Okay I'm finding myself skipping all the sakura stuff and only reading narusasu interaction....I just want you to have sasuke find out what the bitch is doing and put her in a horrible terrible torturous gengutsu for the rest of her life....PLEASE Kill the bitch already!! I'm sorry I'm just too pissed at her to care...a sign of a good story is that it elicits emotions from the reader right??

come on sasuke figure it out!

It's scary so twisted Naruto's getting because of Sakura. You have amazing writing skills. Great chapter!
Keep going.

ok. I have to say I've been loving this story since you started, I read every update and I can't get enough. BUT, can we be done with crazy naruto now? It seems like it's been going on forever. I know you need to set the stage and cement the major character shifts but I get it already. still love your plot though.

much love,
Dvice.

I really get so excited when you update this story but I really REALLY hate Sakura. Everytime I see how much she's hurting Naruto I just wanna stab her!! I sure hope you kill her off soon or something. heehee great story!

omg Naru is geting prety bad and poor Sasu is confused :( this version of the story gets me really angry and sad. Are they going to find out when it's too late :s
I'm so loving this keep it up ^_^

i love love love these stories!

I can't breathe! You are seriously killing me, I know it's only a story but the pure menace in this is suffocating! How intricate and delicate the face of evil. Even Sasuke armed to the hilt against Sakura's claims on him is pulled in on the wisps of affection and confusion. Naruto with all his strength cannot stand up to her. It's almost hopeless. You play on our inadequacies, insecurities and all those good intentions that go astray. It's so hard to read, I feel like I've already been there or am currently wallowing in it, yes, I skimmed some of that in italics because it is unbearable - it isn't just Naruto breaking...

I've started saving this story and am even on a borrowed pc to catch up, looking forward to the updates most especially to her comeuppance because I'm a firm believer in reaping what we sow!

huh. sounds like poor naru is in some major shit