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You are very adept with how you write out the transitions between characters!

Holy shit. Sasuke better go get Tsunade before it's too late. The way Sakura is manipulating tears at my heart and gives me the chills. This is crazy good writing. I can't stand the anticipation!
Keep going!!

Sakura is making my blood boil. I can't wait for Sasuke to find out. I hope she gets what she deserves.

bitch.sakura not you

That's interesting. Sakura let something slip and Sasuke didn't catch it. He said he checked and Naru's been sleeping day and night, yet Sakura says he's been up all night doing guard duty which is why he's tired. Why would she think he's doing guard duty if he's been sleeping and what bout those headaches, will he get Tsunade to check him before he kicks him out of the house?

I've just written a review for "Constellations" as well, but this is fantastic as well!
I got a bit carried away in the first review, so I think this will be a bit.. saner XD.
I really love this fic, and I love the concept of having TWO different stories begin from a common starting-point. I know what it feels like to sit there and go 'I could do this .. bt I could also do that ... or this ... or this weird fourth option...', but nice work that you're actually writing it! It also shows how different a story can develop depending on the writer.
Sakura is psychotic in this! Holy crap, she makes me want to look over my shoulder from time to time.
I really hope you write more to this, because this is just too sad to leave like this! Some kind of closure must come. Whether it's a happy one or a sad one is up to you, but you've got a habbit of just letting the ending thread hang and I really want to know how this ends!
LOVE IT! :D

*cuddles chibi Sasuke and Naruto*

Sakura = EVIL!!!

Great work!

Oh man.. she is smooth. Twisted manipulative bitch, but damn is she good at it.

Keep up the great work!

By Kami how I want to kill her for hurting both of them. How could she! Such a bitch #growls#

See, you bring out the emotions in me XD I simply love this story even though I wish that Sakura will end up in hell for hurting my favorite Naruto guys. I can barely wait till the next update X3

Man, Sakura's really getting to them with this latest tactic....
Keep going!