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for Fulfilling A Desire

by mcpnoi360

person ahmenet
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice but I didn't get a sense of who the second man was. You didn't discribe him.
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was really different...I can't wait to read more of what you produce. This was sad and very intense...just plain whoa! I liked it a lot.