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for Initiation

by gingermaya

person satterb
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh! This was so good. I've seen this trio before, but you always seem to put a realism into your fics that most don't. Thanks for the wonderful story. Miss you lots, Satterb!
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice . . . I just wish it was longer!! I would have loved to see you stretch out the Asuma/Shika action a bit, otherwise wonderful!