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by TheSimi

person eightleggedfreakout
schedule August 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This was just getting to the good part. Are you going to continue? It also seems that Minato has been keeping tabs on his boy through Kakashi even though he hasn't officially acknowledged him. Am I right?

schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*poke poke* more please? And I can't wait for more on the plushie one
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*shudders* Things are getting steamy. I simply MUST have more of this...uke (but still manipulative) Itachi is so so sexy~~
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok this one seams like it will be funny ill be waiting for it to update
person inuspike
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell... that was awesome! Oh, I just love this story. I'm so glad you had a chance to update so quickly. I like who you picked to be Naruto's excavation team; characters that aren't usually set together in fan fics. I also really enjoy the way you put together the corny humor and seriousness in your writing; it makes the story just that much more enjoyable.
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I am such a sucker for Naru-seme and the Naruto in your story just about made me die. And of course, Naru-seme with 'Tachi-uke? *goes into epilectic shock* This is just amazing and I can't wait my next fix. *stares at the screen with twitching eyes and gripping a box of tissues*

Love!
Sara
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really am curious about the phone call. Wouldn't surprise me if it was Minato and Kakashi. If it's Minato..he needs to be strung up by his balls for letting his own son be a target for gossip all that time..plus a ward of the state for two years? What kind of father is he?
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL holy shit this was worth every minute of the wait! Priceless!
person sugar
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!! that was so funny Itachi got caught checking out his own ass by Sasuke I think I must have woken everyone in my house. Oh my goodness that was just great. No words can describe. Please can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.
person blueh
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“There, there little brother,” Itachi placated mockingly, “How was he supposed to know that you prefer to be the bride?” - Pure genius.

And I love Bo. He is just so adorable~~

“Yeah Bo doesn’t care all that much about gender… or species for that matter. If it’s big enough for him to love, he’ll try to love it. Besides… we were both boys to if I remember correctly” – LOL

Bo is a coward, one bark and bite from your pooch and he’ll back off, I promise. – HAHAHAHA. Like master, like pet? Hope not… *waggles brow*

Awww…. Poor Kiba!

And Itachi was a hormonal teenager? O.o

So the annoying dirt rat thought he had a fine ass… - Oh the suspense! Stop doing that. XD We all know how much they wanna excavate each other.