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so good! i really hope you finish it.

AMAZING!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE. MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!

This is so exciting! I can't wait to see what happens! Write fast please!

Okay, I have been into this story pretty much from the beginning and am always happy to see a new chapter added, but you're just killing me here. They finally get together and the scene is skipped? Please, please tell me you intend to add a flashback of some sort containing this most pivotal moment in their relationship. Don't get me wrong, I love the depth of the storyline and characters (I wouldn't read every new chapter quite so avidly if I did not), but I would be lying if I said I didn't want to see the results, culminating all of what they have been through along with their attraction to one another, brought to life. Please take this into consideration.

On another note... that Sasuke is something else. He may be smart, calculating and have brilliant ideas, but he is either not taking into account what he is putting Naruto through, especially after all they have been through together, or he just doesn't care. He probably did take Naruto's feelings into consideration, but went with his decision regardless of how it would make Naruto fret. He DID make sure to wait and make his move when Naruto was not in a position to protest directly. That's the part that's both smart and just plain low to do to your lover/saviour. Trust is a two-way street. Sasuke should be seeking to return Naruto's trust, not hiding things from him. Maybe Naruto can impress that upon Sasuke in the future.

Anyway, love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.

YOU UPDATED! I am so, so happy! I have been very intigued with where this fic is going for a while now. I always like you characterizations of the boys. I also value slower story line development you employ in many of your fics. Let the NaruSasuNaru ship sail far and wide! =)

Yey! An update! I like how you related the fic's title in this chapter. I thought it was just randomly chosen. Ooh more things revealed. It's very interesting. I would love to read more.

Great chapter, I love the action in the story especially when Naruto blew up his place and escaped with Sasuke.

Ah! I am at the edge of my seat. It's do interesting and suspenseful. I literally screamed when I realized there were no more chapters to read. It's sooooo good! I love this.

Don't worry about reality. You are creating a reality of your own in this story and I am definitely interested in seeing how things play out.

Not criticism, just thoughts... Maybe in the future Naruto can give Sasuke an idea of how he really feels about him and that he doesn't just look at him as a job. It does seem as if Naruto is interested in him (at least physically) and Sasuke had been openly/knowingly interested in Naruto from the beginning of their tryst. There are moments when Naruto could let on that there could be more between them if they could first get themselves out of danger. You know... give Sasuke some hope for the future. In my head, when Sasuke was trying to get Naruto to go to bed with him, after basically explaining that he needs to be vigilant to keep them safe, Naruto could have quipped that he might not be able to relax lying next to Sasuke and may be too enticed to do things that they are not in the position to indulge.