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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MOAR! MOAR! Actually, that applies to all of the WIPs you have posted here. I sure as hell like Naruto-as-a-bodyguard scenario when he is not, against all logic, bent over the desk BY SASUKE AT FIRST MEETING and Sasuke who doesn't seem like he is going through a steroid induced psychosis pouncing on people. I have been browsing through the Naruto/Sasuke section here on AFF recently...so escuse me while i bash my head in when I see another mention of Naruto the hip-swaying, tight-jeans-wearig twink. GGGR
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work. Can't wait to read more. p.s. it doesn't show that your not from the city etc. :)
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wannnnnnnnnnnnt.
Loooooooooooooove.
Mooooooooooooooooaaarrr.
Plz.
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Loooooooooooooove.
Mooooooooooooooooaaarrr.
Plz.
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm in love please coninute.
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter....I was not expecting to see action right away so it was a surprise....I hope Naruto gets him to a safe place and claims his reward....a good long night with Sasuke under the sheets.
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolouutly lo this story!!! Now Sasuke knows!! Great!!! I hope Naruto will be ok!!! And we will see Kakashi!!! I love him!!! I really hope to see you soon!!!
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story too! You are very good at writing conversations, I enjoy that part of the story the most. It doesn't matter that its a field trip- , or a bodyguard story I love your style! Please update soon!:):)
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it~ The scene at the bar between Sasuke and Naruto was perfect. I'm really interested to see where this goes- like what Itachi's up to and when the danger will come and what would happen to Naruto and Sasuke if Sasuke found out about Naruto's job.
Can't wait for the next chapter~
Can't wait for the next chapter~
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi...hello there.....another chapter please.......please.......???
Sasuke is one cocky little shit!
Post soon!!
Sasuke is one cocky little shit!
Post soon!!
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seductive Sasuke, I like!
Just have a little critique here for you but it's not so big. I'd re-read over the chapters because there were some present tense words mixed in with past tense words and it was quite confusing reading those sentences.
Just have a little critique here for you but it's not so big. I'd re-read over the chapters because there were some present tense words mixed in with past tense words and it was quite confusing reading those sentences.