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October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"How the hell was Kakashi managing complete sentences?" - love that:)
really, really well done.
nice flow to the story and the chemistry was lovely.
like that you didn't write either Kakashi or Iruka too over the top.
you can see that your Kakashi is more interested than he is letting on, very nicely done.
thanks!!!
really, really well done.
nice flow to the story and the chemistry was lovely.
like that you didn't write either Kakashi or Iruka too over the top.
you can see that your Kakashi is more interested than he is letting on, very nicely done.
thanks!!!
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot and fun!
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So freaking hot! I got the impression from Kakashi's reaction to Iruka's teasing about moaning and panting that he does not usually have that strong of a reaction. He seems like he would remain detached from that like everything else - only there on a purely physical level but with no real connection. BTW, thx for writing this. This is the first fic that I have read where it tells Iruka and Kakashi's first time. Ususally they are already an established couple in whatever fic you read.
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you wrote this.
IRUKA IS THE MAN!
IRUKA IS THE MAN!
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This looks good! I'm hoping for some more KakaIru action! ^^